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Falling In Love With You
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Falling In Love With You |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Falling In Love With You By: Noah Eaton 1/12/02 Hand in hand we walk on the beach Catching the crown jewels of falling stars Tidal waves kiss our feet with the foam of the sea I carry you safely in my ivory arms Under these pale bashful marionberry skies I'll kiss your eyelids slowly as you fall asleep Caressing your thighs, painting you in the moonbeams Finding castles among the stars, which you and me weave I am not perfect, but I love you so much All I have to give is all you've ever dreamed of We'll facillitate our dreams, I give you my hearts key Rest with me, sweet angel, we will make sweet love Your every sigh enlightens me in my loves mantra I am the moth kissing the light of your heavenly abode I don't want to miss a single flicker of your happiness For we are two hearts with one true lovers soul I give this rose to you, for all the love we'll share For you are the rose of my heart, my angelic lover Sweet Joanna, there's no feeling more lovelier Than falling in love with you, forever and ever and ever... [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-12-2002 07:46 PM).] |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
This is very beautiful, sweet Noah. God bless you.  -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
"Marionberry skies"...I must go seek some of those... beautiful imagery, Noah...I like your brevity more and more... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah Noah~You are such a romantic! This is beautiful, as are all your writings. Enjoyed so much! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* I love it when people are falling in love and I always knew you would write incredibly romantic poems when it happened to you, Noah, and I was right...this is a romantic masterpiece. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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dawn to dusk Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 68Colorado |
Oh Noah, this was so sweet!!! What a beautiful poem. Joanna is a lucky girl! Good work! Noelle "Hold fast to dreams, for is dreams die, life is a broken winged bird that cannot fly" Langston Hughes |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'Under these pale bashful marionberry skies I'll kiss your eyelids slowly as you fall asleep Caressing your thighs, painting you in the moonbeams Finding castles among the stars, which you and me weave' 'I am not perfect, but I love you so much' This is beautiful, Noah...you truly have created some breathtakingly romantic images here...wonderful write from you! sp   I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Noah, This is just beautiful!!!!!! This is definately one of my favorites from you. So sweet. Hugsssssss, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Noah, You are so romantic and sincere. This is lovely. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Noah...you seem to have come up a notch on the romance scale....lovely write... |
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J. K. Mitchell Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 311GA |
Wonderful! The type of poem that makes you sit and sigh. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Noah - Joanna must be a very special someone. Your poems are so warm, and with caring. You are truly an artist my friend... BC |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
"The crown jewels of falling stars" do you ever run out of words Noah, this is so so so lovely. floria |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Noah, I almost sway in my computer chair while reading your love poems. They are so melodic and rich. (I sure wish I had someone writing these kind of poems to me) Sandra |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Noah - Truly a beautiful romantic write. Well done. Dave |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely writing...James |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
So much romance, I love it. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Hey Hunny, You know, I absolutly adore this poem. I never thought that someone would feel all these beautiful emotions for ME! Indeed, I am lucky. Love you!   |
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Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
Oh Noah (tear), this is so beautiful! And written for your sweet Joanna. There is only one love for you and she is the one. Your heart is so beautiful, it deserves a lady like her. Greatly written buddy, I loved it! Randy Meador a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very cleverly written and so very romantic as usual Noah! |
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