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Love By The Sea
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Love By The Sea |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia 
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My body moves in slow motion I'm lost in your vivid eyes of blue My love is deeper than any ocean I find that I'm anchored in you A self confessed dreamer But my dreams I don't share I keep then close to my heart Always needing them there I am an island You are the sea I'm in awe at your beauty As your waves wash over me How tranquil you are As you glisten in the sun The tide is steadily rising As this day is nearly done Your beauty is unmatched Nothing can compare As lovers walk along your shore Drunk on love without a care The moonlight glistens over the water As the lovers walk slowly by Soon their souls will meld together Beneath a diamond studded sky Suetang |
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Canuckster Member
since 2002-01-09
Posts 285New Mexico, USA |
What a moving and passionate metaphore. Enjoyed this! |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Quite beautiful, you do so hold your dreams close. You are an island ... words of paradise. A pleasure to read. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh my gosh, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, a diamond-studded sky hanging above where true lovers dance, I love it!!! (kiss on cheek) Sooooo beautiful, sweet friend, this had me dreaming of holding my dream girl Joanna and dancing with her! We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is soooooo heavenly! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
" I am an Island You are the sea" Wonderful words in this poem suetang, I loved reading it, floria |
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thepoeticplumber Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 185 |
This was certainly engulfed with affection of a huge magnitude. Your need this as an island to love every inch of the sea. Rog |
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