Open Poetry #17 |
If I Could Not Speak These Words |
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
If no voice I had for words would you still be able to hear? Would mere actions be enough to vocalize them loud and clear? Would those words still flow from me with every beat of my heart? Could my eyes then still convey my wish never to be apart? With a soft brush of my hand would I still be able to show, feelings that are held for you the ones I'd pray for you to know? When lips pressed soft upon you would you feel desire in the flame? Could you feel the fire burning as my soul would cry out your name? If those little words again I could not be able to say, would you know that they were felt if they could not be said each day? If I could not speak these words would you know that they were meant true, each time that my heart whispered.... I am still so in love with you. (For Bill, With all my love ) On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. ~Me~ (I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth) [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (edited 11-27-2001).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
What a beautiful love poem. "Could you feel the fire burning as my soul would cry out your name?" And did he hear this yet? Or feel it? Or read it? Thank you for sharing this gentle poem. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I'll let you know in a few, he is reading it now. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
I hope he shows you how much he loves this! Words are wonderful, written...I love them like this! You are smitten! Wonderfully! Big Smiles and big wink ~somy!!! Sincerely, Regina P.S. Okay now it's his turn! It's all in the mind |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
What a tender piece spoken from the heart. I'm sure he will love it! |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
What a beautiful testemant to your love. I'm sure he will love it too. There are so many ways to say "I love you", and the actions definitely sing louder than the words themselves, though the words are nice to hear sometimes too If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
What a beautiful write to your love. Peaches |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Gentle Spirit - a very touching and tender writing. You don't have to worry about speaking those words, as you speak them very well... BC |
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sigheyes Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323the winds of destiny |
I have a feeling he already knows. If he doesn't, he shouldn't. *s* |
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