Open Poetry #17 |
Taking You Home |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
A sad journey I made to Sweden Back in August of '99 My Dad's ashes I carried with me So very close was his heart to mine The journey from Australia to Sweden Was one of the hardest I've had to do My heart and soul had been shattered How very much did I pine for you Your cancer took you so quickly There was barely time to say goodbye I tried so hard to remember the good times As a tear trickled down from my eye I told Dad we'd bury him in Sweden The beautiful place of his birth We'd lay him to rest with his parents They'd be together as one in the earth My Dad is finally at peace now Amongst the birches and the pines Through nature I see him so often And he resides in this heart of mine Suetang |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Keeping the promises to those that mean so much to us can offer a comfort all it's own and the memories will forever be there to enlighten you as well as the heart of the one that will forever mean so much. Loved the read and the powerfulness of it and the excellent cadence of it made it a true treat and delight indeed. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
As I said yesterday, he will be with you always in your heart. And always looking down and watching over you. Does he play golf? My mom's up there organizing golf games, and playing social director. I'm convinced of it If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Suetang - a beautiful writing about your dad. This writing expressed your open heart for him. The best to you... BC |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
A very lovely tribute to your dad and your love for him. Dan Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Beautiful tribute for your father, your love for him shows in every line. ((Hugs)) ~*Theresia~* |
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Robert A Member
since 2001-10-29
Posts 174 |
love reading about traveling, love it, yeah |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I know of journeys with ashes. This one touched me. Hugs and tears. |
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JoMason Member
since 2001-12-07
Posts 57 |
Suetang, So sorry you lost your father not long ago. Beautiful words you have written for him. In years to come memories more wonderful will grow. Jo Mason |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
How very comforting are all of your lovely comments and so very much appreciated. Thank you for taking the time to read this. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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