Open Poetry #17 |
Innocence |
wornways Member
since 2001-10-18
Posts 204CA, USA |
Innocence Do you recall A time Before cares All began to press Upon you Within you Can you remember When your heart Was free Unfettered And you loved Without fear Was there a time When you expressed Without reservation Your affection Did you shout with glee At sight Of a friend Aunt or uncle Grandparent Did you cling Hard to the leg Of someone you loved When they were fain To depart Did you cry Openly When your heart Ached within you Missing someone Forever special |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I still think I have a shred of this left within... thank you for this... |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
I have felt all of this in different parts of my life. Thanks for the memories If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
YES! YES YES!!! I love all the questions in this poem! YOu recall innocence well! I am many. |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
Yes, I do. Sometimes, I wish it would come back. Thank you for this, a gift from the heart. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
wornways, It seems so longer ago. Way longer than it should be. Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I can remember this from years past...I have experienced them all....thank you. |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Adulthood is such a burden..isn' it? How I miss such times..... thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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wornways Member
since 2001-10-18
Posts 204CA, USA |
thank you all. i'm really glad to see that this poem has invoked the memory of these special times in some of you. this makes me feel that the poem has accomplished its mission. thanks again for sharing your thoughts in response to it. |
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