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Breathing Lessons
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Breathing Lessons |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Breathing Lessons should my blood jell in my veins because you no longer remain it seems to continue to flow and my heart still pumps and goes plenty of air left for me to breathe taught from your absence without leave things now are so painfully clear I only missed you when you were suppose to be here "I have already paid for all my future sins." Sade...(King of Sorrow) |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Breathe in, breathe out. Life's blood still flows after the sadness blows away on the next wind. |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Jello blood quivering Chilled by your breathless sigh Shook to a shivering Stilled when you walk on by. Where breath Where beating heart continues There words Your writing show venues With eye closed, My mind flashes to visions You exposed By your words well written. Gloom |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
winds blow in to take sadness away tomorrow brings light of a brand new day!! Well written. *s* |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Such sorrow fills these tranquil words, sweet friend! (big hugggsssss) Oh Helen, I pray with all my heart love will again touch your heart and fill it with happiness! (sigh) We all love you, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Great write Helen. Could feel the ache and longing in this one. Just remember to BREATHE! ~hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Good write, this! Thanks for sharing! |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Just keep breathing...things will all become clear in time and life will go on to better dreams. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OneSlickLady~ 'I only missed you when you were suppose to be here' What a cool line~ Speaks volumes~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
h Marge beat me to it, so I'll just agree: "I only missed you when you were suppose to be here" says so much. e |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
1slick_lady- Liking this, I am..  Nicely done. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
loved this.. I am many. |
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