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Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

0 posted 2001-11-13 06:52 PM

I Wish

Over mountains he comes to me
across the prairie plain
Through green forests and fields empty
he travels the terrain

My Heart is touched by sweet caress
from words filled with magic
I wish I knew how to express
feelings almost mystic

My spirit reaches out to you
across our lands so dear
I hope my wishes now come true
are words that you will hear

Carry my voice upon the waves
and deep into your heart
Please grant me what my heart so craves
give love a place to start

Karen Torbiak 2001©

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-11-13 06:53 PM

Karen, this is a soulful write

Kathleen
nickname "Kay"
also wrote as The Lady of Shallot
"be true to yourself"

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2001-11-13 08:14 PM

Carry my voice upon the waves
and deep into your heart
Please grant me what my heart so craves
give love a place to start
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Karen~This is just beautiful! Enjoyed this one, I did.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

3 posted 2001-11-13 09:49 PM

Carry my voice upon the waves
and deep into your heart"

this is stunningly beautiful.....i felt myself closing my eyes and hearing the sea....thank you....just the sound I needed tonight...

Greeneyes~

I keep my ideals,
because in spite of everything,
I still believe that
people are really good at heart.
Anne Frank
09*12*01

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 11-13-2001).]

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

4 posted 2001-11-13 09:53 PM

Ah Karen, we can only hope. I'm with you on this one.
Sandra

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

5 posted 2001-11-13 10:29 PM

Startime,
I know it crossed the desert. 'Cause I got it here in Phoenix! Fun write.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2001-11-13 11:54 PM

StarTime~
Just lovely, lovely, lovely~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

RSWells
Member Elite

since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

7 posted 2001-11-14 12:33 PM

I wish for your telekinetic message to be felt and that one deserving is attuned. Enjoyed

"Happy people have no history" - French Proverb

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2001-11-14 04:36 PM

Yes I believe there are many that have prepared this place and are hoping to meet another with like dreams and desires...James

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

9 posted 2001-11-14 05:32 PM

enjoy

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

10 posted 2001-11-14 06:47 PM

Karen....I know that there is a man out there
listening to your romantic words that are
simply out of sight and a joy to read....
Thank you poetess.....much enjoyed.

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

11 posted 2001-12-11 03:05 AM

StarTime-
   This is beautiful...just beautiful.
   Love it.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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