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Open Poetry #17

I've Held Your Mind

Robert William Gruhn
Member

since 2001-11-06

Posts 168
California, USA

0 posted 2001-11-23 09:29 PM

I've held your mind

Still not your hand

As thoughts sift

Through screen to eye

Brain accepting

Analyzing

Rejecting

Touchless reality explored

As keys are depressed

Turning words into emotion

So deftly expressed

Yet I long for the warmth

Of your actual embrace

Holding your hand

Seeing your face

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

1 posted 2001-11-23 09:34 PM

*sigh* a lucky lady is the one you dream of taking in your arms and giving her a loving embrace. Beautiful, Sir Robert, very beautiful as is your loving heart. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

PoeticLicense
Junior Member

since 2001-11-18

Posts 30

2 posted 2001-11-23 09:36 PM

Your gentle words lend a soft edge to "high-tech" romance, enjoyed!

The Lonely Stranger
Member

since 1999-06-18

Posts 361
Upstate, NY, USA

3 posted 2001-11-25 06:56 AM

Robert ... do I understand correctly ?? Is this about the fact that although we can reach out and touch others through this medium, that it is no substitute for a loving touch? I hope I understand properly and I hope others get to see this "buried treasure" I've found.

No one ever listened themselves into trouble.

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