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Take Me Away (3 part tanka)
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Take Me Away (3 part tanka) |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA 
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Take Me Away I just want you to Take me away from all this Hold me in your arms Carry me to paradise Only you and I exist * Only your love can Soothe the stress that is here in This delicate soul Being lost in your safe arms Hidden away from the world. * Can we runaway? Just the two of us alone Our hearts lost in love With no one to bother us Our souls intertwined as one [This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 11-24-2001).] |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Hi Tara, This is so pretty. It reminds me of the special person I want to TAKE ME AWAY hehehe ((hugs)) RosePetal |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Tara, you are sooooooooo romantic, this poem too makes me think of my dream girl I dream of sweeping off her feet and loving her forever! (smiles) I LOVE IT!!! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tara, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I'd love to, Tara, but Dave looks bigger than me.....  |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
rosepetal - Maybe we will both be lucky and get rescued from everyday life  Thanks for reading.Noah - Thank you  And welcome back from your vacation.. I hope you had fun*hugs*Michael - You do have a point there..lol. You could always carry me off to TX, I think Dave would be ok with that  Thanks for stopping in to read "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home [This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 11-24-2001).] |
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PoetriPrincess Member
since 2001-11-17
Posts 55CA / U.S.A |
This is how I sometimes feel, good read. 2 the point. I don't know if u noticed, you misspelled heart n your last verse. Friends & Poems, |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
PoetriPrincess -  No I didn't see that! Thank you for letting me know! And thank you for stopping in to read.. I'm glad you liked."My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
What a beautiful thought, to just run away from the cares of life, just the two of you...together forever. I like this If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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NapalmsConstantlyConfused
since 2001-05-15
Posts 529 |
sweetheart, i have a buick, very little money, and a bad attitude problem, as i was told today. wanna come? i'll pour all my money into my gas tank and we can drive south until we stop being able to speak the lingo, and then stop and make camp. sound like a plan? -Dave |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Tracey - It does sound wonderful doesn't it? Thanks for stopping in. Dave - I would be there faster than you could say my name. Right now, that sounds perfect  You just have no idea."My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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