Open Poetry #17 |
If I Could Only Dream Of You... |
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I rarely ever remember a dream flick They stay in a fog that hovers so thick I wake in the morning wondering if I had a dream of you within my mind’s eye Only in my dreams am I seldom there. Trying so hard to see and to share. Wanting to have you before my eyes Looking in slumber for just a surprise. I dream of silly things and some fright. I dream of what used to be in my sight. The jobs and mobs and old submarines departing on yet another wartime scene. A fleeting kiss of a face that I do want Those visions of past graves that haunt. The loves I've lost and never felt again The feelings that through me ran and ran If only I could just be once again graced with all the love that we've felt and faced. I would surely give my life to just sleep For in my dreams you're a treasure to keep. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
its so nice to dream...yet so disappointing when you wake up and realize it was only a dream. I like this Magnus (hugs) [This message has been edited by RosePetal (edited 11-23-2001).] |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
A thought provoking poem sir. Do we dream to live or live to dream? |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thanx RosePetal...this is pretty well the way my dreams go...so frustrating when you have it right there and cannot remember it well. My wife remembers dreams like a book.... I am envious of her. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Poet de Vine...Yep....this can bring about quite a few thoughts...I think I live to dream...maybe that is why I am still here. Waiting for it to happen. Thanx. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Vandana, you're welcome..... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I write my dreams down, often, ummm I wonder if there's a poem or two around in my drawer! I enjoyed this. Kathleen |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thanx Kay....now go find one of those poems.. I would write mine down...but so far the page is basically like a blank screen...blank |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* I live for my dreams because then I know I find love. *grin* I always look forward to the velvet of night when the man I will love comes into my dreams. Very well done. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Karen....thanx...someday you will wake and he will be there waiting for you to arise. I certainly do hope so. |
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