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Hopelessly Unromantic
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Hopelessly Unromantic |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Hopelessly Unromantic Romance isn't always as romantic as it seems. The candles flicker and burn out... The moon loses it's sheen... JamesLee November14 2001 |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
well said, but there is always hope, that's why the moon comes back... and follows a complete phase of 'wax'ing and waning ... regards to you, James, Sudhir |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sad thoughts here James....but, very well written! ~hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Dear one....romance is something we create. It takes effort but the benefits are wonderful. If the moon isn't shining then light some candles in the house. If the candles go out whisper loves sweet words in her ear. You are very much a romantic at heart and romance does not have to be 24/7 but it is something that puts the spark we want to see in our lover's eyes. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
James, Time for a new candle!  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JamesMichael~ Very simplistic - BIG message~ Nicely done~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Ah, James, now you are sounding sad, and I hope it is not so. I love ths poem, and the title caught my eye, because I know that you could not be unromantic Sandra |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh James, you are what always makes her happy, for you have such a romantic heart that makes loves magic possible. (smiles) It's every beating of your heart, every word you speak to her, every kiss you share that makes romance possible, and you are a true romantic! (sigh) Sweet love always fills your sweet heart, dearest friend, now make her swoon with your lovely words! (big huggssssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Sudhir, Nancy, Startime, Larry C, Marge , Sandra and Noah for the wonderful responses...actually I have plenty of candles...the romance has only just begun...I was just reflecting on some moody thoughts that I hope keep their distance from me and the woman I love...I wrote another one at the same time as this one titled "Hopefully In Love With You" and I will be posting it soon and it will reflect my true mood...James |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Keep those candles burning James Michael!!! Don't let your wick go out  Kathleen |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thanks Katleen...I believe I was thinking of all the times that I was in a one sided romance and the disappointments I felt...fortunatly I seem to have a good one now...James |
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