Open Poetry #17 |
Us writers |
Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
May that of we, us one or few; Release a thought that blooms as new And with a passion watch that seed; Fulfil ones want and quest of need May words as rhythm in a song, Bring thoughts to bear and dreams to long May passages of hidden peace, Find way of path and hearts release May words as marriage join as one, Release ones load that weighs a ton Let us, companions, your life share, And in your heart be ever there |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
G'day mate, Welcome to the blue pages, taint often I sees a fellow Aussie. Good write Write on. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Rick, this one deserves some kind of award! I just loved it! Beyond a great write, My Friend...much talent here. Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
G day Kethry, nice to hear from a fellow Aussie, it's a great place to share some thoughts and find friends that enjoy the same thing. Thanks for your reply, I hope to share many more writes with you. I hope you enjoy the New year, I am off to Tookarook, which is inbetween Rye and Rosebud for a couple of weeks, hope you have a nice break yourself. Dear Saunni, thanks for you wonderful reply, it is always nice to get some words of encouragement, I hope you have a great New Year with many joys and writes to share. To you both, thanks heaps, have great time, I will catch up soon. Sincerely Rick |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This was delightful and inspirational Rick ... lovely sentiments, complimented by a wonderful rhythm and flow throughout. Much enjoyed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
With gentle pen you fill the page sharing from deep within Words to treasure in any age rewards from us you win Rick....I love it. Have a Very Happy New Year and a wonderful trip. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Sooooooo beautfiul, sweet Rick, may we alle mbrace in this circle of friendship and sing with all our hearts intent! (smiles) We all wish you the happiest New Year, sweet friend! (big hugggssssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rick, thank you for sharing! ay love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Rick, this is a geal gem. I especially liked this: "May passages of hidden peace, Find way of path and hearts release" Have a wonderful safe exit from 2001, and please continue to spread these loving thoughts throughout 2002 and beyond. May the ripple of LOVE |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
very inspirational write dear poet friend! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Rick...so thoughtful...so fulfilling...thank you... |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Rick This was a stunning piece of writing which I am sure that every poet can relate to. Our words and feelings sometimes can become a burden that we need to offload and what better place to do that than here on these pages of powder blue. I so enjoy everything I read of yours. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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