Open Poetry #17 |
A Morning Such as This |
Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
A Morning Such as This In all of time there’s never been A morning such as this When in the shadows near my lips There was a waiting kiss A phrase of love was in the air A voice of whispering grace That was about to sweep me Far beyond this earthly space The dawn had crept in purple silence Through the ocean mist Defining golden eyes that bathed The lips that would be kissed Never was a love so grand Or passion so devine Never was the dawn as sweet as this, in all of time Elizabeth Santos |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I've had a few mornings like that, beautiful aren't they? Enjoyed this alot. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
and never to be again. . . until tomorrow morning. . . wonderful Liz. . . as always. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Poets are defined by their style... and yours remains unique to you... beautiful |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Good Morning! Thanks, and I slept very well last night too. What a wonderful way to wake up. Doc |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Elizabeth, This is wonderful! I hope you have many many mornings such as this! ~hugs, Nancy~ ~Life may not be the song you requested, |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I do I ever agree with Sunshine about you definitely having your own style that suits you so well. This was so lovely and almost made me want to go find myself a man - now wait a minute - I said almost! ~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~ |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Liz, I love this, it's wonderful! This is why I always look forward to seeing your name here; this one's definately a keeper Take care, Melissa "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Mornings like this are indeed beautiful. Made me think of such mornings that leave a smile on my face and warm fuzzies in my heart. Lovely Elizabeth If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
THank you so much, dear poets, for your kind remarks. I loved your comment, Mysteria, and I "almost" believe you. Liz |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* having someone to share such a morning like this with is the ultimate pleasure. Absolutely beautiful. I am so very happy that you had such a morning. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
A beautiful portrait of bliss. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Liz- Gorgeous, as always, my friend. I love the romance of this one. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Oh Liz how wonderfully penned...love it!! ~*Theresia~* |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Thank you for reading my morning poem You comments have made my evening a better one. THanks Liz |
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