Open Poetry #17 |
Crystal |
Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
There’s a crystal in my window That reflects the morning sun It’s the prism of enchantment That makes worries come undone It’s a clear drop of contentment It’s a dangling bit of grace That shines iridescent colors On my pillow and my face It was made to make a rainbow from the beams of morning light But it makes a dozen spectrums in the dawning of delight It paints arcs of joy across the room On ceiling up above Such a splendid gift of rainbows From a someone that I love She handed me a crystal And I hung it in my room And her love shines rainbow colors That my heart cannot consume Its a teardrop of affection It’s a diamond in the morn It’s like the sunbeam that awakened On the day that she was born Elizabeth Santos |
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~lewisone~ Member
since 2001-11-23
Posts 91Virginia |
Very nice! A beautiful poem...Look forward to reading more from you. Those little things mean so much, and stand for so much love, what a beautiful way of expressing such a love..... ~lewisone~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Of course you collect crystals! Anyone who writes as you do must! I do too...so IWIHWT...I named my daughter Krystal...her middle name is Joy...and she is! Thank you for this! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, Save this for her when she grows up. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
how beautifully penned! I know that this one must be a treat to read and I was right. Thank you for sharing this beauty ~*Theresia~* |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Elizabeth! Lovely indeed! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Liz this is a treasure... a lovely sharing of cadence and imagery wrapped in special memories. I just had to smile while reading this, reminded of my sister's love for crystals and prisms. Calls them her personal rainbows thank you for the smiles dear poetess "If I could fly ... I'd pick you up ... I'd take you into the night ... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Liz--I love what crystals do to light and I love what you do to words...I think they are the same. Hugs! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
indeed there is none that shines brighter than you dear Lady. . . wonderful. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I'm forever amazed at your gift with flow in the words. Kathleen (Kay) |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
This was very nice. What a wonderful way to awaken. Enjoyed |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
A crystal makes a wonderful gift, for every time it makes a rainbow, you think of a special person and it lights up your day. THanks for the lovely remarks Liz |
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