Open Poetry #17 |
Island Holiday |
BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
People cannot possibly understand nor comprehend where she has been. Seeing out for herself living within her means. In the realms of an uncertain destiny that is often times mistaken for fate. Only to be carried away by the winds of change blown faraway, landing somewhere outside of no where on an island in the sun. Taking comfort in her seclusion where others have made the connection but never truly see the attraction. Perceived as a castaway adrift in a desperate situation perhaps even destitute, she's heard them say. But it is she who meets her needs, knowing what she can live with and without fending for herself, which is all she's ever known and all that she is left with. So like the pain, and those you hate to love. In time she's learned to ignore them. Stranded on an island, where everyday's a holiday. *inspired by Dark Poet* ~Holiday of Pain~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Wow, this is really good. Sometimes it is best to venture off alone, go on your own, away from the maddening crowds. Now it's off to the other poem that I missed. Thanks. |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
I second that Wow. Her isolation, perhaps even a touch of nonchalance, her appearing not to care what others think. She almost succeeds. I could be wrong, but that's what I see here. I like poems that stretch the reader's imagination. Very nice writing. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is very good. Lots of things said, interesting undercurrents here. Enjoy the island.. Sandra |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
My island is filled with fantasy. It is where I go to heal. Very well done. I love the whole message in this poem. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
Loved this! I am many. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
success in isolation. . . hmmmmmmm. . . I like this idea. . . it's a good one. . . -------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I apologize for not getting back here sooner. I really do appreciate every one of you taking the time to read what I wrote. It brings me a small amount of peace to put my thoughts down, and know that I might be understood. Many thanks to all of you. |
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