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Cold Beauty
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Cold Beauty |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
It fell slow drifting flakes at first following the slap of ice against panes and roof Dancing on winds wire they teetered in rise and fall walking the tight narrow north Beauty in their mass reminded me of a woman I knew too warm to be ice too cold to be fluid but beautiful She balanced on thoughts and fears that drove her to sting when driven with force She covered me once I her but a thaw never came and I hate the cold |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And we can see why! Once again you've whipped in with your words, and left the chill of them behind... where IS the warmth... ah...here in my smile...welcome home! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 Another one for my Favorites. Icy yet warm, imagery to stir the imagination and the mind. Thank you again, Ron. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Positively Icy! Corinne |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Icy! Lets build a fire!  Good one Ron!~hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Icy one, now it's time to warm up.Nice imagery. Peaches |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Cpat...a great comparison....and as always, a well done poem. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Wow, Cpat. Nice write. Left me feeling cold though! All writing comes |
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PoeticLicense Junior Member
since 2001-11-18
Posts 30 |
Intriguing write, tight and well constructed! PL |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh,this is EXCELLENT Sandra |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
I like this one very much. I too hate the cold, both in the weather and in people. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
I love this. You painted a painfully beautiful picture of one that lays waste in warmth that never comes. Brilliant piece. So cold the hidden heart. Sincerely, Regina |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
She covered me once I her but a thaw never came and I hate the cold Incredible write, I related to each word. So appreciate your style. Really liked this one, Ron. |
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emily Member
since 2000-10-03
Posts 142USA |
I love this poem to pieces!!!! |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Better to have gloved in frost than to never have gloved at all. "Happy people have no history" - French Proverb |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Cpat...beautifully written...it all came together so well. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Cpat Hair - most beautiful to read... BC |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Cpat Hair- This is wonderfully penned. A very enjoyable read, my friend.  Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Wonderful piece Ron. |
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