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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2001-11-14 10:25 AM



Whispers
~*~

Basking in the warmth
of God’s whisper...
searching,
there’s much to know
listen,
walk the footsteps of another
as you grow
make him your brother
flow,
in all the riches around you
sing with the voice of angels
paint in colors of love
somewhere,
dreams really do come true
so wish upon your star
believe in the whisper in the wind

BloomingRose




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Janet Marie
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1 posted 2001-11-14 12:15 PM


Deb this is so lovely....
written whsiper light...feather soft...
which is your poetry's signature gift  
Beautiful...and love the pic...
I know someone who this reminds me of..
will have to send this to them  
well done poetess Rose...
take care
jm
PS....theyve put up Open 17 now ...
so much poetry...so little time  

You're the hidden cost and the thing that's lost in everything I do.
In the sunlight, in the shadows ...
No ... I'll never stop looking for you.

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2001-11-14 01:09 PM




(smiles) Your loving heart always blooms with such sweet beautiful love! (sigh) We must always listen to the spirit of the innocent child within all our loving hearts and listen to our dreams, for they can come true! (big hugggsssssss) I love it, sweet friend, we all love you so much! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Debra, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2001-11-14 02:53 PM


BloomingRose~
This is just a wonderfully awesome piece~
Such gentle thoughts flowing through it~
*Hugs* for sharing~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
     noles1@totcon.com                

Lady In White
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4 posted 2001-11-14 03:59 PM



Love this...hugs to you!

vandana
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5 posted 2001-11-14 05:35 PM


enjoy
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6 posted 2001-11-14 06:25 PM


this is beautiful, just beautiful....thank you....

Lone Wolf
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7 posted 2001-11-14 06:32 PM


I like this one very much, Deb.  Very wonderfully written.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

BloomingRose
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8 posted 2001-11-15 02:43 PM


Thank you all. You are so kind.
~*~
Deb

SEA
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9 posted 2001-11-16 11:18 AM


this is wonderful, and I love that picture  

[This message has been edited by SEA (edited 11-16-2001).]

wayoutwalt
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10 posted 2001-11-16 11:19 AM


o yuh! this is an awesome idea
Mark Bohannan
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11 posted 2001-11-23 08:42 PM


WOW!!!!  This was an amazing write and among my favorites of yours.  I love the way you wound the gentle breezes into such lovely whispers and of course you are so RIGHT ON in your message.  Lovely write my dear friend.
Bill Charles
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12 posted 2001-11-23 08:56 PM


BloomingRose - I can hear the whispers from the sea shell as HE speaks in your writing. Very touching, and I'm glad that a had a chance to read this one...

BC

vlraynes
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13 posted 2001-11-28 05:27 PM



Deb-
   This is gorgeous.
   Such lovely thoughts in this, and
   beautifully penned.
   I do believe this is one of my
   favorites of yours.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

BloomingRose
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14 posted 2001-11-28 06:02 PM


SEA~Thank you. Glad you like the picture too.

Walt~ Thanks bud.  

Mark~ Thank you. Hope to read more of your poetry soon.

Bill~ Glad the message was clear to you. Thank you so much.

Vicky~ Always my friend, I thank you. Hugs to you!

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