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The Coming
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The Coming |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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The Coming the wind changed whipped direction stopped me cold freeze came where summer had stood the Bradford Pears shed red ice promised all I could hope for were sunny days to light the crystal |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
a cold light that can be.. nicely painted imagery..and a nicely constructed poem. I enjoyed! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ A lovely piece~ 'freeze came where summer had stood the Bradford Pears shed red' Enjoyed this so much~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
A cool change has been arranged. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Ditto Richard - he said it better LOL  ~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~ |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Hunkering down here...  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yep, it's getting ready...thanks, everyone for the read! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
And here I am longing for the coming of those chilling winds. Very nice writing. |
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PoeticLicense Junior Member
since 2001-11-18
Posts 30 |
And when the sun shines just right, you can see rainbows reflecting through the cold crystal, a touch of dark with the hope of light, well written! |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* time to curl up in front of a fire with the one you love sharing a nice glass of wine. I love cold changes because they give me these kind of visions. **hugs** stay warm.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Karilea- This is beautiful, my friend. Really enjoyed this one. Hugs,  ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Karilea, One more to demonstrate the versatility of your poetry I loved this! It lit my crystal Liz |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
mother nature speaks her breath cold from the far north prepare for the change Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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