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Some Paths
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Some Paths |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Some Paths Some paths are like a thorny rose That thwarts a close yet please the nose They victimize the eye in hue And sometimes end in midnight blue. Some paths are lit with stars of light That twinkle joy into the night. That holds you in a trance of dance That takes you step by step to chance. And music plays on heated breeze That titillates your heart in please And magnifies the light of night To falsely sate the sight to bright I’ve wondered down this roads duello And touched the bare of fair and mellow. And gave a piece of soul each dole That left my heart with less than whole. Yet still I wander down this path Naked, ready, a lover’s bath |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
with sing of song and lilt of rhyme I read you every single time you wend your way into my art as Keeper of this poet's heart... so bathe away in glorious glee as long as it brings us poetry... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, What else????? *L* |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
They victimize the eye in hue And sometimes end in midnight blue. Some paths are lit with stars of light That twinkle joy into the night. That holds you in a trance of dance That takes you step by step to chance. ======================================= And magnifies the light of night To falsely sate the sight to bright I’ve wondered down this roads duello And touched the bare of fair and mellow. And gave a piece of soul each dole That left my heart with less than whole. Yet still I wander down this path Naked, ready, a lover’s bath ================================ Oh Stinky...thy muse just needs to be kissed for this.   what a very, very ... very cool poem. (ohhowilovewhenyouwritelikethis) *S* OH-and we wont tell Ron you and Randy are running naked in the forums...  *L**winkiewinkie*  meI would wait till the end of time for you, |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Beautifully penned....Love it  Charisma ~TMP~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, You better not Ron don't like his poets running naked in his site. Glad you liked. Winkiewinkie Stinky. Charisma, Thank you sweet. *L* |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Beautiful poem Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, Thank you Liz. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Another classic, Sy... both to your "Syle" and for us traditionalists to savour. Much enjoyed. -MVS "If you don't ask: you don't get." -Steve Miller |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
MMm naked neath starlit sky wearing smiles and a wink in the eye Hope Hey Symour i did truly enjoy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mark, Thank you for the read and comment. HopeS, Glad you enjoyed. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ LOOK ! Behind the trees ... me and JM ... watching with glee  As you cavort in your 'birth-of-day' suit~ WAHOOIE ... dang, you're CUTE~   And ... I'm NOT telling Ron .. I'm keeping the good stuff to myself ! ! Love n' hugs n'other fancy stuff~  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Could I ask for anything more, more, more. Love and kisses. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
ROFL @ Margie hey Stinky...that b-day suit looks good on you(Randy too) *L* What are we gonna do with that Margie... besides love her to death |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
wonderful work, my friend... Regards to you, Seymour, Sudhir |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, That's what we're gonna do. WW S Sudhir, Thank you my friend. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Nothing wrong with a little of that!!!! A whole lot of admiration for this piece! Simply marvelous down to your toesies! Sincerely, Regina It's all in the mind |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I simply loved your poem, but am sitting here wondering is this a sight I really want to see - you guys running naked in the halls of Passions? - hmmm  ~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~ |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is a beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing it. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Rwood, Thank you Regina, wonderful comment. *L* Mysteria, Didn't intend it that way, winkiewinkie *L* SmartChick, You are welcome and thank you for the read. *L* |
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