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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2001-11-21 08:26 AM

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Glories Promise – Quick Sands End

Insidiously with silken gloves
And imperceptive velvet hugs
She mossback me in steamy slack
And pulled the string that closed the sack.

Bridled me with a bit of hope
Straddled me with spurs and rope
And whipped my ass from walk to lope.

She gave me naught the rules of court
Transgressed much more then I could thwart

Grinned and witnessed the devils sport.

Purgatory the place of dwell
Just one step away from hell

Drained in harrow, down to the marrow.
With prison bars straight and narrow.
Coated in aphrodisiac.

What penance I in souls defense?
What recommence or recompense?
Where could I send a mind to mend?
Glories promise and quick sands end

Sunshine

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1 posted 2001-11-21 08:39 AM

You stand apart from all the rest
putting thought to stress of test
just when I think you've wrote your best
you come back quick in style and zest...

Nan

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2 posted 2001-11-21 08:44 AM

Very intense, Sy - You ARE Artist Extraordinaire...

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2001-11-21 08:51 AM

Sunshine,
Love your reply, *L*

Nan,
That's me, love and kisses. And an extra *L*
because you are.

Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

4 posted 2001-11-21 08:56 AM

This is a bit punishing
It just happens to be wonderfully written
As always, your brush is filled with color and held by an artist of phrase
Liz

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2001-11-21 09:02 AM

Elizabeth,
And you my most colorful butterfly filter the sun to most wonderful hues of gold and blues. love sy

Janet Marie
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6 posted 2001-11-21 06:09 PM

Insidiously with silken gloves
And imperceptive velvet hugs
She mossback me in steamy slack
And pulled the string that closed the sack.

Bridled me with a bit of hope
Straddled me with spurs and rope
And whipped my ass from walk to lope.

She gave me naught the rules of court
Transgressed much more then I could thwart
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She did what????!!!!?????
Let me at her....
I'll get my can of Whoop-*** out and me and Randy will send her back to hell

No body better mess with me Stinky!!!

Sy-babers if this poem was any cooler Id need me thermal feetsy-jammies on to read it

You just keep rhyming away ... I collect them you know

Have a wonderful Holiday Stinky...save Randy a drumstick.
love ya
me

I would wait till the end of time for you,
Then do it all again ... it's true.
I can't measure my love for you,
There's nothing to compare it to.

Seymour Tabin
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Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2001-11-21 08:20 PM

JM,
When I read your answering posts I just want to go on forever. You always say what I want to read or I read what I want to read in what you say. What ever you are a delight. I love you weather far or near and you have added pleasure to the lonely years. You and your family have the best of holidays.
Love Sy

Janet Marie
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8 posted 2001-11-21 10:10 PM

right back at ya Stinky winkie *L*

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

9 posted 2001-11-21 10:15 PM

JM,
And back at you twice. Winkiewinkie Love ya Stinky

catalinamoon

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The Shores of Alone

10 posted 2001-11-21 10:15 PM

Sy, this is great, the end really packs a punch.
Happy Holidays.
Sandra

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

11 posted 2001-11-21 10:17 PM

Cat,
Always look forward to your comments. Thank you. *L*

Lone Wolf
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Lansing, MI USA

12 posted 2001-11-21 10:18 PM

You've left me with a smile this evening, Seymour. Very intriguing write.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

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South Carolina, USA

13 posted 2001-11-21 10:20 PM

Seymour....wow...whamo...nicely done...
that is poetry sir.

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

14 posted 2001-11-21 10:34 PM

Lone Wolf,
Nice comment, thank you.

Mangus,
Thank you kind sir.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

15 posted 2001-11-21 11:03 PM

WOW!! Fantastic! Great way to end my evening! Thank you poet sir!
Blessed Thanksgiving to you and yours.
~hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

peaches73533
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since 2001-11-04

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OK, USA

16 posted 2001-11-21 11:15 PM

Seymour,
Double WOW

what a great way to end the evening.You keep me interested as always.
Peaches

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

17 posted 2001-11-22 08:11 AM

Enchantress,
Thank you and have a happy thanksgiving. *L*

Peaches,
Thank you for the double WOW and have a happy. *L*

Martie

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18 posted 2001-11-22 07:35 PM

Sy--Blessed be the man who feels, that writes the feeling into a verse, who makes the thought in others stir, who makes the sigh of Sy.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

19 posted 2001-11-22 10:35 PM

Martie,
A most delightful comment. thank you *L*

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