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Open Poetry #17

Sailing, flailing, madly wailing

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22

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TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 2001-11-20 01:45 AM

I see you as you dream
Thoughts in clouds
With broken seams
I sow them up
and in our sky
Pop them once
and watch them fly
I jump in one
with me inside
Now the future’s
open wide
Sailing, flailing,
madly wailing
The tether to your mind is lost
To the sea, Oblivion
Let not our love
be down there tossed

[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 11-20-2001).]

Robert William Gruhn
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since 2001-11-06

Posts 168
California, USA

1 posted 2001-11-20 02:15 AM

So, if you drown Walt, will your love be lost? Thanks! Oh yuh! Robert

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

2 posted 2001-11-20 03:34 AM

As long as both heads are up in the clouds, nothing is lost! You know Walt, this had a nice gentle feel to it, I really liked this one.

~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

3 posted 2001-12-03 09:38 PM

A simple, request..beautifully done in poetry. Miss ya, Walty!

Your storm of assumption feeds anger I am calm enough to hold inside. Don't pretend to know me if you've never put stretched out your heart with since

Poet deVine

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Hurricane Alley

4 posted 2001-12-04 09:39 AM

Beautiful Walt!

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2001-12-04 09:47 AM

Wayout,
Sounds like a hot air balloon to me. LOL enjoyed.

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23

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On A Journey To The Unknown

6 posted 2001-12-04 09:59 AM

A lovely poem this is, Walt.

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

7 posted 2001-12-05 11:34 AM

I love this... whimsical and tender all at once. *S* Well done, wow!

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