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Lovers Moon |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Revised: Lovers Moon Where is that moon, I used to know? With butter yellow, afterglow? That listened, to my every sigh? Where has it gone, where does it lie? That magic sphere, paramours fair It shines I swear, but know not where? How have the years, made me so blind? Where is that moon, where is that mind? That rare mystic, of alchemy? That lovers freak, of revelry The keeper of, my secret core The golden treasured, lovers store. That magic lanterns, bright of trance That lovers light, that made us dance The glory of, the flowers sigh How did it dry, how did it die? I swoon of why in search the moon The boon is gone, it is high noon. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
wow, this has to be one of your best! This is a treat this morning, thank you! Kathleen (Kay) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
hey...ya made it! (first cup of coffee, smile) I loved the flow and the meter here--and I too have been looking for that elusive "magical" moon...she seems to be glaring a bit harsh these days. Beautiful poetry from a beautiful poet! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Where is that moon, I used to know? With butter yellow, afterglow? That listened, to my every sigh? Where has it gone, where does it lie? ======================================= That rare mystic, of alchemy? That lovers freak, of revelry The keeper of, my secret core The golden treasured, lovers store. That magic lanterns, bright of trance That lovers light, that made us dance The glory of, the flowers sigh How did it dry, how did it die? I swoon of why in search the moon The boon is gone, it is high noon. ====================================== Well, I hear there is one heck of a moon over Miami?  *L*Hey Sy babers....if its high noon...that means you and Randy are sleeping too late. LOL This is such a perfect poem Stinky... I adore the lovely imagery and the classic Sy internal rhymes, meter, wit & wisdom you have wrapped them up in. Even snuck in an alliteration or two for added pleasures  The moon has been comming up butter cream yellow for days now...its so cool..just like this poem and the poet who wrote it. As usual you are right on time. *winkiewinkie*  |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Beautiful poem Sy. I ask the same, where is my moon, it seem to have abandoned me. Sandra |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I'll go grab that yellow moon, and trade you one sun.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Irish, Thank you Kay for the WOW. *L* Serenity, Thank you sweet. *L* JM, Dear Tinkerbell, true Randy and I slept till noon and couldn't find the moon. LOL WW Love ya Sy Sandra, Yours is going through a phase, mine is phased out. LOL *L* Sunshine, Your on. *L* |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Heres your moon Sy-babes...now you and Randy can sleep in *L*  This one IS called "Moon Over Miami" *L*Now you and Randy meet me on the SWOON side LOL |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
BEAUTIFUL sonnet Seymour!! I love this! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet Seymour! (sigh) Mmmmmmm...the alchemy of love, the boon of romance, I love it! (smiles) May loves moon forever shine in your heart and give you eternal happiness! I love it! (big hugggsssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, My Tinkerbell has turned to Genie. Do I have anymore wishes left? Winkiewinkie Stinky Sea, THank you sweet. *L* Noah, Are you standing under mistletoe? Thank you Noah. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
 Tinker says you got a whole lotta wishes left... and winkies  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ ~Lover's moon if you will - falling from such a magic quill Poet who in gaze of phase writes in glow of loving still Fall across my windowsill in words of such desire still lights the fire lover's moon~ How you've inspired me~ Thank you, poet~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, I'll remember that. WW S Marge, A lovely inspiration. *L* |
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