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crazy4u Member
since 2001-10-28
Posts 67 |
Once I had happy lips which chatted away at the mere sight of my name The hours passed like water and the days like minutes and with that inertia this feeling grew Now I saw your words as mine and I took every one to heart. Every compliment, every sigh, every thank you I touched your hand only once and I felt the protection of my soul the sturdy wall to lean upon for life What brings tears to my eyes though is the way your feelings were as fleeting as the time You needed me for a while as I need you Now the need is gone making a hideous hole in my wall leaving this silence on your part... its so quiet... It deafens... And I wait... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Losing the support of one you needed and thought would be there is really hard. I think I see that hole in the wall. In fact, I know I've seen a hole like that before, and nothing seemed to cover it up for a very, very long time. Now I've discovered that writing about it helps close it up. Here is a hug for whoever needs one.  |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
What a special poem, I can tell this one has a lot of meaning for you; A great poem, I really enjoyed reading it, Thanks . L.of.L. Tommy . XXX 'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Well, now that's not very nice of someone to do that to anyone!!! Feelings are special gifts we give and should be treasured!! Kathleen (Kay) |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
(((BIG HUGS for you)))) I know you will patch up that hole in no time! Keep your head up! RP |
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