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The Fire You Ignited In Me
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The Fire You Ignited In Me |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia 
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Such tenderness I'd never experienced When I kissed your warm sweet lips As you moved my body closer And your hands reached for my hips My passion was slowly burning Like an ember in the flame How my heart surrendered to you As you tenderly whispered my name My eyes met yours in an instant As we joined in a passionate embrace Then your fingers travelled so lightly Around the natural curve of my face My hand made its own sensual journey Around the edge of your manly jaw How eager was I to travel With so much more for me to explore We kneel down together on the sheepskin By the fire's warming glow Can you see how much I love you? My eyes will tell you so Your hands reach for my waist As our sweet loving has now begun Together by the roaring fire Is where we two will so soon become one Suetang |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Incredibly sensually perfect. I love it. Pure passionate love. BRAVO!!!!  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Suetang, I'm with Startime on this one! Sexy write. Mmmm! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Beautiful portrait, Sue.  All writing comes |
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Carol Lina Member
since 2001-11-18
Posts 94USA |
Yes, this is the way it should be! I hope it is this way for you Carolina |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I love the thoughts of this...James |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Suetang, Oh I like this The love and need is felt so easily. I also hope this is based on a love in your life Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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