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There's a love coming soon
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There's a love coming soon |
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Carol Lina Member
since 2001-11-18
Posts 94USA |
It all fell away on a Carolina day off the coast where I sat and I cried held my heart in my hand, left my tears on the sand for there was nothing I hadn't tried. I had held on too long, but that day heard a song it spoke to me clear as the sea. Carolina, my girl, leave your place in this world dry your tears, take a breath, count to three. So I stood gazing far, saw a wild flashing star it seemed to be following close. I just walked from the bay, no more words left to say hush, be still, and you'll find your repose. From my own past emotion, I turned from the ocean I ran till I felt I was free. There's a love coming soon, in the path of the moon I shall find him or will he find me? Carolina [This message has been edited by Carol Lina (edited 11-18-2001).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I often wonder who finds who...James |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
 how very romantically magical. I love it!!! I love it!!!Welcome to Passions. I can see that I am going to love reading your poems. This one is beautiful. You will find the poets here loving, compassionate and sincere.  **hugs** good luck with your dreams...I am sure they will come true. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Carolina, Great words.You will leave your mark on this world.Also, love will find you or vice versa.Sometimes looking too hard can be a hinderance. Peaches |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
It's a moment of delight when you find each other---I hope it happens for you soon. Welcome to the forum Carol! |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Welcome! I love your poem it's very me  |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
This was wonderful, Carol. Simple thoughts with a great flow. Welcome to Passions! All writing comes |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
 WONDERFUL FIRST POST!! I look forward to reading more of your work! ~Nancy Lee~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
from over the bay. . . the cry comes out. . . well done. . . welcome. . . take a look around. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
So I stood gazing far, saw a wild flashing star it seemed to be following close. I just walked from the bay, no more words left to say hush, be still, and you'll find your repose. From my own past emotion, I turned from the ocean I ran till I felt I was free. There's a love coming soon, in the path of the moon I shall find him or will he find me? =========================================== Carolina this is absolutely fabulous poetry!! Your clever rhyme scheme leaves my craving for rhyme and cadence giddy and sated Your imagery and express of emotions are equally impressive. This is a wonderful entrance to poetry land.. (one I wish I had wrote..one for my library) WELCOME, I look forward to more of your work jm I would wait till the end of time for you, |
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Carol Lina Member
since 2001-11-18
Posts 94USA |
well, each and every one of you, this is instant gratification right? Thank you so much. I really appreciate these kind responses. Carolina |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Carol, Superb poem, I just love the style. Welcome to Passions. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
This poem is very visual and flows beautifully. Great to read...much enjoyed. Again....welcome to Passions. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! This proves there is always hope. Please check your email!  |
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Robert William Gruhn Member
since 2001-11-06
Posts 168California, USA |
Beautiful Carolina, welcome, Robert! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! It is going to be my joy to read your poetry! |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Welcome to Passions, Carolina..enjoyed your first post very much! |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
I'd like to think people find each other but a nice outlook on love. I breathe the dust, the dust is me. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Great first post! I like your style very much. Welcome! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Carolina, this is very good. And this stands out as being a great beginning: "From my own past emotion, I turned from the ocean I ran till I felt I was free." |
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Carol Lina Member
since 2001-11-18
Posts 94USA |
again and again thank you kind people. There's always hope especially after spending the day near the ocean right? I appreciate your replies. Carolina |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Carol Lina Such a wonderfully uplifting first post you have given us. Welcome to Passions and I will look forward to reading more of your lovely words. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Carolina, Welcome to Passions! This was a beautiful write, and has many layers of emotions involved with it that left me to ponder... I also love your name, want to name my little girl that (should I have one)... and I'm from the Carolinas, so sorry to ramble here lol but I really enjoyed this and look forward to reading more from your fine pen. take care. amy "Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Carol Lina, At least some of us can get the name right! Wow, welcome to Passions. I'd do what Nancy Lee did for a welcome, but she won't teach me!  I'll let Midnitesun know how to spell your name. Great poem. Glad you're here and look forward to more. Sin isn't fair, but God got even, grace isn't fair either. larry c |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
O Yuh very nice entry you come back now yuh hear? |
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Carol Lina Member
since 2001-11-18
Posts 94USA |
I'm smiling here. Your replies brought me comfort! Thank you all so much. I have new beginnings to write about Carolina |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hi Carolina, this is absolutely beautiul. You included all of my themes in one, moonlight, the ocean, and lost love. With atouch of magic thrown in. Story of my life..You did it well. Thanks Sandra |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Carol Lina, Wow... Wonderful first post!! Really talented. WELCOME!! and I'm looking forward to see more of your work |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Carol Lina, Welcome to Passions!!!  I'm sure you will love it here You have made a wonderful entrance into the family Hugs, Tara [This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 11-19-2001).] |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Truly lyrical, wonderful romantic verse, I envy the ease of your talent. Regards, Olias. |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Hi Carol Lina (I got her name right Larry C!!!) You found the right place to be dear, writing such lovely poetry. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Carol Lina Member
since 2001-11-18
Posts 94USA |
I apprecite all of you reading my poetry.. Olias, it's not always easy sometimes I toil for days over something, wondering, hesitating, then I just well, finish it. Titia, you know I was supposed to be Carol Luna (for the moon) but sometimes I can't spell!Thank you all for reading my words. Carolina [This message has been edited by Carol Lina (edited 11-19-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CarolLinaLuna~ Welcome to Passions~ You're just going to love it here~ We are the bestest friendship circle on the Internet~ Enjoyed reading your first post~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Sooooo beautiful! Welcome to Passions, Carol Lina! I know you're going to love it here! |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
A very lovely poem - and I don't just say that because you are a fellow Tarheel... enjoyed. There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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Carol Lina Member
since 2001-11-18
Posts 94USA |
Thank you all and Jamie? What is a "tarheel" (tee hee) Carolina |
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