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From Lonely To Loved
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From Lonely To Loved |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
There once was a child standing all alone With no one in her life and nowhere to go The trials and tribulations that she had been through It was so hard for her not to be blue She went through the motions day to day Keeping to herself and not having much to say She grew up quickly, the child left behind Hoping and trying to find a better adult inside By the time she was just sixteen,she knew life all too well Of al the hurt, heartache, and all of the hell And then one day should one man notice her And decide no matter what, he was to know her He showed there was no reason for her to be alone No longer for her to walk singly down that road He showed all the love that he had to give Showing her that life was defintly worth it for her to live She still has her ghosts and problems from time to time But he's always there with his love helping her to shine From lonely to loved is such a great emotion To think this cam frome one man's devotion Peaches |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
WOW!!! This poem could have been written about me but without the man who would show her what love really is. A magnificent poem that brought tears of joy to my eyes for the one it was written about.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Bravo peaches! A great ending, a great beginning. Now we need to find his twin to send to Startime. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fabulous last two lines...sometimes that is a long journey from lonely to loved...James |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Startime: I'm glad that you enjoyed it and that it touched you.It was amazing to find someone like this and I know one day you will find someone just like this. Midnitesun: Thank you very much.I will start keeping an eye out for her. James: Yes it is but when you finally get there it seems as if it was all worth it.Thanks. Peaches |
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Carol Lina Member
since 2001-11-18
Posts 94USA |
What a beautiful ending to this poem!!!!! Carolina |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Excellent work, peaches. We all need someone to show us the way. All writing comes |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
LoneWolf: Thank you and yes we do. Peaches |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
"From lonely to loved is such a great emotion" How true... but I object to Midnitesun's comments  , I object!! I'd rather there be triplets, so that you could send one over to to Startime, and one to me too...  I'm really in need of TLC right now |
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Abigaile Member
since 2001-10-21
Posts 112San Mateo, CA |
"From lonely to loved..." such a beautiful expression. And a feeling that you have captured well. I am happy that you have found your love, for love is what makes us human. *SMILE* "I am nae poet, in a sense; |
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Lisann Member
since 2001-01-31
Posts 350 |
This one could have been written about me------including the man. I've been without a family my entire life and all of a sudden-along comes a man and he took it all on. I've put that man through hell and back and he is still in here. That is why we aren't letting his cancer beat him. NO WAY. Not after everything we've been through together. We definitely belong together---no one else on earth would be able to put up with either one of us.LOL. LOVE CONQUERS ALL. No matter the size of the demon. |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Carol Lina: Thank you so much. vandana: Glad you enjoyed it. Mon Cherie: Glad you lied it and I'll keep my eye out for two. Abigale: Thank you very much. Lisann: I'm so sorry to hear this, but I know what you mean.My prayers and thoughts are with you and your family. Peaches |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Most excellent!!! A showing of the impossible possible, the motions emotionable!! Happy for you!! |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
ctowen: Thank you.Just when it seems as if there is no hope it suddenly appears. Peaches |
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