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Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2001-11-17 07:16 AM

Little Word

word grasping paper
leaving stories for the soul
poems to ponder

                                    now come, little word
                                    for in dreams you played
                                    scampering in
                                    then out
                                    leaving wisps of sound
                                    on the wind

                                    like leaves of grass
                                    you tickled mind's eye
                                    awakening
                                    life’s story

                                    if you were sent, stay
                                    but if you were imagined,
                                    stay longer
                                    for the places you take
                                    me
                                    are those I would share with all
                                    and more

                                    so ripple me with
                                    your laughter,
                                    let me fall into your pools
                                    of delight
                                    where sun glimmers
                                    moon leaves path
                                    to heaven
                                    and more
                                    your liquidity restoring my soul

little word having
caught my attention now please
stay till love comes too


~*~
©Karilea Rilling Jungel
17 November, 2001

MyEnchanted_Melody
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since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

1 posted 2001-11-17 08:50 AM

if you were sent, stay
                                    but if you were imagined,
                                    stay longer
                                    for the places you take
                                    me
                                    are those I would share with all
                                    and more



~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Little word...indeed come and stay
don't leave my way

Wonderfully and eloquently written...

I really loved it dear Karilea...

Thank you for sharing it

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Accordionmaid
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since 2001-10-28

Posts 153
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2 posted 2001-11-17 09:20 AM

Enjoyed this, makes me think of the 'word' as a 'bird' -- nice imagery.

bslicker

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state of mind

3 posted 2001-11-17 09:24 AM

Great writing
Bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

Startime
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4 posted 2001-11-17 10:21 PM

Floating clouds came to my mind. Wonderful visions in this poem. I love it.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

5 posted 2001-11-18 12:07 PM

Hmmm, that's funny all I could do was sing, "Three Little Words", an old, old song my Aunt used to sing, he he, oh but this kinda liked me.

~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~

Duncan
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6 posted 2001-11-18 12:10 PM

now come, little word
for in dreams you played
scampering in
then out
leaving wisps of sound
on the wind

Often, I write poems in my head as I'm going to sleep...that's what this reminded me of. And trying to remember them in the morning.
Loved the feel of this.

[This message has been edited by Duncan (edited 11-18-2001).]

Beki
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Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

7 posted 2001-11-18 05:18 AM

This was beautiful, Sunshine, I really enjoyed the read! I could relate well to teh sentiment expressed....

Nan

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8 posted 2001-11-18 08:28 AM

Words create visions
Unbounded within mind's eye
Endless excursions

Love it

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

9 posted 2001-11-19 10:39 AM

enjoy

RSWells
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since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

10 posted 2001-11-19 10:52 AM

A magic word? Not open sesame, perhaps senseofme? Enjoyed.

"Happy people have no history" - French Proverb

peaches73533
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since 2001-11-04

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11 posted 2001-11-19 01:25 PM

I loved this.

Peaches

aries_luv_ppl
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Universal Mind

12 posted 2001-11-19 01:56 PM

great write!

~The first two cup of tea is to throw away; what remains is the best of all.
~Blessed are those who find ordinary things extraordinary.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

13 posted 2001-11-19 02:05 PM

Karilea, I really enjoyed the feeling this one gave me! W0NDERFUL!
AND! Sharon...I know that song!
"Three Little Words." (gee I feel old!)
Hugs, Nancy

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Midnitesun

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Gaia

14 posted 2001-11-19 02:16 PM

A delightful read, full of sweet warm sunshine. I sometimes wake in the middle of the night and grab a pen and paper, to scribble a brilliant thought I don't wish to lose like vapor from a tea kettle. But just as often, I lose it in my unwillingness to get up. And just as often, my "brilliance" doesn't look so great the next morning. Sometimes it's illegible, sometimes just incoherent babbling. LOL, I really did enjoy this one. Thanks.

OLIAS
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Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa

15 posted 2001-11-19 02:23 PM

One little voice whispers one little word... beautiful, Sunshine.

Regards,
Olias.

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

16 posted 2001-11-19 03:02 PM

What litle word would so say and do so much....

very well done my friend... very nice indeed

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