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A Thought |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
In gentle hold, I think of you In these times of ours that we pursue I feel the tender of your touch The smile that means so very much Oneness is oft to be desired When two are together in closeness fired The way you whisper out my name Knowing that life is a simple game Mysteries are held in glow of moon Shining down on the ones in tune Take my hand as we walk away From that glow of night unto the day To walk along the path that leads From heartfelt throb that only feeds Feeding the source of eternal bliss Knowing there can be nothing amiss Be the moon and stars divine Take what is me, all that is mine |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Take what is me, all that is mine" *sigh* so romantic Logan, the way you write so soft and sweet  I just love it |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Logan~ Such *gentle sighs* of realize~ Absolutely loverly~ 'The way you whisper out my name Knowing that life is a simple game Mysteries are held in glow of moon Shining down on the ones in tune Take my hand as we walk away From that glow of night unto the day' I love the glow of your thoughts, softly filling the pages~ Much love~ ~*LittleGoose*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Logan, this is so so beautiful, you are sooooooo romantic! (smiles) May the stars and the moon offer blessings of eternal love in this sweet embrace! (big huggsssssss) Sooooooo lovely! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Logan, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Take what is me, all that is mine Love this Logan! Seems we both have been inspired to write about the night, the stars and moon. Truly enjoyed this romantic piece. Nice to see your words here...You have been missed. Thank you ...warm hugs, Nancy Lee ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hi Logan, I have missed seeing you the past few days also. This is one of the best yet, I have to say. Sandra |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
...like a tender dream realized... I have missed reading your words, my friend, and this poem has not disappointed me in the least; rather, it has reminded me again why I enjoy your poetry and impressions. -MVS "If you don't ask: you don't get." -Steve Miller |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Be the moon and stars divine Take what is me, all that is mine ===================================== THIS is rhyme DIVINE.... and my goodness sweet keeper...how wonderfully inspired and romantic... youre gonna hang the moon and make us swoon  this is a cadenece kissed beauty my friend... very very nice You're the hidden cost and the thing that's lost in everything I do. |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
lovely poem, very nice indeed. A true romanitc you are. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
You always leave me with a soft and gentle smile, with your warm caress of words. Moonbeams shine brightly on your path. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
This is wonderfully romantic... Logan... You have my regards, Sudhir |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Beautiful thoughts, indeed... thank you! |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
A thought that brings a sigh to the lips and softness to the heart. Very well done. I love this thought. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Logan--This expression of love is a sigh..so beautifully filled and flowing across time. Hugs! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Logan- Such a gently penned expression of love. Just lovely, my friend. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
If this is one your thoughts? I wanna go hiking through your brain. Though methinks I would end up building a hut and staying awhile! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
*Giggling at Karen* Beautifully done Logan. |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, SEA, thank you, that type of reply coming from one who pens the romantic word so eloquently, is very much appreciated..very gentle smile Very gentle smile to you, Little Goose, you are always too kind, but then, that is the nature of you..Hugs Noah, gentle smile, thank you for all your nice words and for the read. Always nice seeing you Ahhh, Nancy, yes, we both seem to have been, and one day, I will be as good as you are with the words..very gentle smile, and thanks for the welcome back Sandra, you are sweetness itself in your words. Thank you, and have missed seeing you also. Have to catch up on my reads, of which yours will be with the first...very gentle smile Mark, my friend, thank you for being here. Your comments are always looked forward to reading and I appreciate your kind reply..gentle smile Ahhhh, Janet Marie, gentle soul. As usual, you are most too kind to me. And I was happy to see your muse moved for you, well done...very gentle smile and a hug whisky, thank you for coming by for the read and your nice reply...very gentle smile Midnitesun, very gentle smile, then you have made my day with your reply. I so appreciate you being here. Sudhir, thank you, that was very kind of you to say so and I appreciate your regards, my friend..gentle smile Ahhh, Sis, you are always welcome, and no, Thank you, for your opinion, is always important to me..very gentle smile Thank you, Startime, both for the reply and for being here, I am glad you liked it..very gentle smile Martie, very gentle smile with a hug back, thank you for such sweetness of words. Vicky, I appreciate that coming from you, thank you with a very gentle smile and hugs back also Ahhh, Karen, wear soft soles then, please, my poor brain can't take hiking boots...grin..thank you, gentle one..with a very gentle smile Thank you, Sharon, you know I always value your thoughts..very gentle smile |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
A ballad of the heart. Quite lovely. Thank you. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LoganGuardian~ Just cozying up to the warmth of your fire~ Think I'll stay awhile~  Your spirit comforts mine~ I brought some sticks ... see how they set the fire ablaze? Love ya' ~*LittleGoose*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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