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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2001-12-11 03:05 PM






~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2001 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-12-11 03:14 PM



You know, sometimes the shorter...

the sweeter...

it's liking me here!

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2001-12-11 03:16 PM


Marge,
My oh my, call me when your done. *L*

Kit McCallum
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3 posted 2001-12-11 03:17 PM


Beautifully composed Marge ... and a lovely presentation to warm the soul.  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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4 posted 2001-12-11 03:21 PM




(sigh) Oh Marge, this is sooooooo soooooooo gorgeous! It had me dreaming of the girl I'm in love with, my sweet RosePetal Joanna! (sigh) She's soooooooo beautiful and always makes me smile! (sigh) This is such a beautiful dedication of love to your love, he will love you forever! (sigh) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, you are a true rose! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marge, thank you for sharing!


May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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5 posted 2001-12-11 03:38 PM


Love is in the air

Magnus
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6 posted 2001-12-11 03:49 PM


Now this is the short way of saying a lot
about LOVE.....nicely done.  Thanks Marge.

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7 posted 2001-12-11 04:01 PM




This comes with the velvet touch of a rose...

Wonderful.....and such beautiful presentation as well.....

~Sigh~.....I simply loved it sweet Marge..

Thank you
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Domzi
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8 posted 2001-12-11 04:31 PM


Aww, this poem was so lovable!

Poetry is spiritual ventilation!

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9 posted 2001-12-12 12:27 PM


"Velvet in the call of me"
===============================

Now theres classic Margie poetry...
lovely phrases and presentation Margie-girl
you muse looks good on you   *teehee*
we love you in love dear one  

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10 posted 2001-12-12 01:02 AM



LOVE! wrapped in fragrant poetry.

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11 posted 2001-12-12 01:05 AM


Marge--You see love with such boquet..beautiful!
Marge Tindal
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12 posted 2001-12-12 10:45 PM


Karilea~
Thank you ... 'sweeter' it is~

Seymour~
Oh, my dear .. I hope it's never 'done'~
But, I'll keep your number handy~

Kit~
Thanks so much, sweet lady~

Noah~
Thanks~

InterLoper~
demure *smiles* from this lady~

Magnus~
Some things are so easy to say~
Thank you~

MyEnchantedMelody~
Thanks, lovely lady~

Domzi~
I'm so glad you think so~
Thank you~

JanetMarie~
Shucks, I even 'love me in love'~
Thank you, my friend~

MidniteSun~
Thanks sweet lady~

Martie~
My SIS... I get roses everyday~
He's a gardener of delight~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
       noles1@totcon.com                  

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13 posted 2001-12-13 10:45 PM



Marge-
   Short, sweet,and sooooo beautiful.
   I'm loving this bunches.
   I love watching the love you're in.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky



  

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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14 posted 2001-12-13 11:03 PM


How totally romantic, Marge...
It would make a beautiful lover's greeting card.

copyright2001 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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15 posted 2001-12-13 11:28 PM


Very sweet Marge!  I love they way it was short but it made a beutiful impact.  And the background to it was ver cool!

     Randy Meador

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16 posted 2001-12-13 11:31 PM


love looks good on you  

very nice little love ditty....*sigh*  

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"tomorrow's another day, and i'm thirsty anyway--so bring on the rain!"

JamesMichael
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17 posted 2001-12-13 11:42 PM


Marge this would make a beautiful greeting card...as it has done...James
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18 posted 2001-12-14 12:36 PM


How lovely!  Sometimes beauty comes in the smallest of packages and the shortest of lines.  You've proven so well that you don't have to say much to say a lot.  

~What is cherished most is what must be the hardest fought for.~

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19 posted 2001-12-14 12:46 PM


Such a beautiful write.Love doesn't have to be spoke in so many words.The picture accentuates your words beautifully.
Peaches

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20 posted 2001-12-14 09:16 AM


Marge, you've been singing some happy songs of late... It's nice to see you smiling so..
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21 posted 2001-12-14 09:35 AM


Marge...this is simply astounding...i can see you smile....

Thank you and sign me up for classes whenever you're starting....for each day i am seeing some neat gifts from you....

luv & hugs,
amigo

Marge Tindal
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22 posted 2001-12-14 09:58 AM


*You all are so kind to me.
I spill my heart all over the pages
and you share with me in my joy~
Thank you ALL so much~

Vicky~  Love you my friend~

Lyra~  Thank you~

Hypnosis~  Thanks, I appreciate that~

DG~  I'm wearing it all over~
Well, maybe not (on lips) Tee-Hee~

JamesMichael~
I thank you for sharing~

DarkAngelChelle~
Thank you so much and welcome to Passions~

Peaches~  Thanks ever so much~

Nan~
Awwww~  Thank you my friend~

Amigo~
If I've shown you a smile .. my day is brighter~
LOL on those 'classes' ...
I make a better student than teacher~

Love n' hugs to all for a wonderful weekend~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
       noles1@totcon.com                  

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23 posted 2001-12-14 10:30 AM


Wow! This is just beautiful, Marge. I love it. The picture, too.
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24 posted 2001-12-15 11:42 AM


enjoyed
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25 posted 2001-12-15 11:49 AM


It's like magic when someone is in love and their love flows out to be shared with us all. You have brough just such a beautiful magic with you today. This is a masterpiece from the heart and I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT!!!BRAVO!!! I LOVE YOU IN LOVE TOOOOOO....KEEP WRITING..I AM THRILLED TO READ YOUR HEART. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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26 posted 2001-12-15 11:57 AM



Just sweet as you are my dear

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Want to use the pics on my website? Just let me know. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace

Marge Tindal
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27 posted 2001-12-19 03:29 PM


SmartChick~
Sorry I took so long to acknowledge your sweet reply~
Just had a 'hair-ball' I couldn't spit out~
Thank you dear lady~

VanDana~
Thank you~

StarTime~
You make sharing poetry an event~
Thank you sweet lady~

Titia~
You're a doll !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
       noles1@totcon.com                  

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28 posted 2001-12-19 10:00 PM


Hello Marge
How nice to see you!  The title of this got me in as you know how much I love my garden. Your words captured the very essence of love.  Take care......Sue

Suetang

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29 posted 2001-12-20 10:19 AM


SueTang~
It's so nice to see you come to smell the roses~
Happy Holidays to you, my friend~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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