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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2001-12-16 09:16 PM



Marking Time
~*Marge Tindal*~

- 12 -
-   Marking Time  -
11-   Every little minute   -1
-  of every day that has you  -
10-  in it ... ticks through the  -2
-  dawning of ideas enfolding the  -
9- memories of time on the face -3
-   of a clock upon the wall that   -
8- knows no end of our time at -4
-  odd hours of the night as  -
7- if rewinding it would -5
-  make it last  -
- 6 -


*Rewind from a whole buncha-lotta-go ...
cause it's about 'TIME'~




~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
       noles1@totcon.com                   

[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 12-16-2001).]

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Marsha
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1 posted 2001-12-16 09:31 PM


Margie girls sister of my soul, this is wonderful. I love it when you get creative like this. No one does it like Margie girl, and no one does it better than you when you are shining so bright.
Fabulous darling girl utterly utterly fabulous.

          
Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy
        

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


Startime
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2 posted 2001-12-16 09:35 PM


BRAVO!!!BRAVO!!! I love it. Oh how perfect it is. You know I love shape poems and this one is stunning. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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3 posted 2001-12-16 09:41 PM


Oh Marge!! I just LOVE how you do these!
Fantastic!  You are just sooo creative girl!
~Happy hugs, Nancy~

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

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4 posted 2001-12-16 10:04 PM


too cute...helen
Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2001-12-16 10:25 PM


Marge,
My time is your time, cute and clever. *L*

peaches73533
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6 posted 2001-12-16 11:02 PM


Marge, I love it when you get creative like this.
Peaches

vlraynes
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7 posted 2001-12-17 02:35 PM



Marge-
   Loved this the first TIME, and loving
   it even more this TIME.
   You're awesome!
   Love you,
   ~Vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Marge Tindal
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8 posted 2001-12-20 10:00 AM


*Thank you ALL~
This one was such fun to do -
Inspired by MarkB~ ...
who needs to get his little 'cowboy self' in here !

(MarkB~ and Chris ... thanks for the Christmas card) ... love you both~
gv ge yuhi~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
       noles1@totcon.com                  

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