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Ivy Rose
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since 2001-12-29
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MA, USA

0 posted 2002-01-01 05:42 PM



I am a river
pouring into the oceans
of your love.My currents
twirling and spinning,
dancing and bobbing.
My waters rushing
into waterfalls
of deepening desire.

I am a river
flowing for
your thirsty pleasure,
your untamed ravishing.
My eddies spinning
your heart
into unsatiated,
swirls of love.

I am a river
roaring out the sound
of your name,
a thousand
cries of joy
overflowing
the river basins
of your soul.


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Startime
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1 posted 2002-01-01 07:25 PM


Ivy...go into forum 18 ...that is where everyone is posting now...repost this poem there. **hugs**
Irish Rose
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2 posted 2002-01-01 08:08 PM


this is lovely, Ivy, so rich in imagery.

I am/Kathleen/

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2002-01-01 10:17 PM


IvyRose~
This is stunningly lovely~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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JamesMichael
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4 posted 2002-01-02 02:39 AM


Lovely...James
angelbear
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since 2001-05-22
Posts 139
North East, USA
5 posted 2002-01-02 10:03 AM


Wonderfully crafted and great title! Love the feel to this poem.

I can't control
my destiny
I trust my soul,
my only goal
is just to "be"
-Lyrics from RENT

Opeth
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The Ravines
6 posted 2002-01-02 10:07 AM


Whoa! Somebody get me a bucket of ice, and make it quick.

Well done.

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