Open Poetry #17 |
A River In Misty Blues |
Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
I am a river pouring into the oceans of your love.My currents twirling and spinning, dancing and bobbing. My waters rushing into waterfalls of deepening desire. I am a river flowing for your thirsty pleasure, your untamed ravishing. My eddies spinning your heart into unsatiated, swirls of love. I am a river roaring out the sound of your name, a thousand cries of joy overflowing the river basins of your soul. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Ivy...go into forum 18 ...that is where everyone is posting now...repost this poem there. **hugs** |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this is lovely, Ivy, so rich in imagery. I am/Kathleen/ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
IvyRose~ This is stunningly lovely~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...James |
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angelbear Member
since 2001-05-22
Posts 139North East, USA |
Wonderfully crafted and great title! Love the feel to this poem. I can't control |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
Whoa! Somebody get me a bucket of ice, and make it quick. Well done. |
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