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Suetang
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0 posted 2001-12-31 05:00 PM


At the edge of the cool clear water
Is the place where you'll find me
I'll be soaking up some Summer sunshine
While I gaze on out to sea

The seagulls glide gracefully by me
Across the water so clear and blue
The only thing missing from this picture
Is the magnetic presence of you

I catch sight of my reflection in the water
From where I lay at the end of the pier
Soon there's another face staring up at me
A kiss on my cheek let's me know that you're here

I cannot contain my happiness
As I kiss you and hold you so tight
Immersed in our sea of love we'll be
As this day turns into night

We'll look on out towards the horizon
As the sun melts over the sea
You'll surround me in your loving arms
Such a place of perfection for me

We'll admire the constellations
By the light of the silvery moon
As we serenade one another
To the sound of love's heavenly tune

Suetang

© Copyright 2001 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
Lady Lost
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1 posted 2001-12-31 05:02 PM


This is so beautiful!  Tears have clouded up my eyes.. I really enjoyed the peace and love in this post.

~beth

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2 posted 2001-12-31 05:11 PM



Ah, Happy New Year, Sue...we'll each look forward to another year's worth of writing, yes?  Yes!

rwood
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3 posted 2001-12-31 07:48 PM


I just wanted to take a moment and wish you a happy new year Sue. Even though I am late and must rush right back out. I hope you have a wonderful new beginning day! The poem is lovely and wish I could trade you the cold!

Sincerely,
Regina

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4 posted 2001-12-31 07:55 PM




(sigh) Oh my gosh, you are sooooooo romantic, sweet Sue, your crystal heart reflects the beauty of love! May the constellation you share with your true love forever shine with joy! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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