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strbbux
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0 posted 2001-12-31 04:39 PM


Continuum

As the sun rise glows golden,
And stars have surrendered to defeat,
Saphire skies go into hiding,
Dark sky and stars are obsolete.
As warmth of daylight begins,
Sleep now falls on darkened skies,
Awakening me to a new tomorrow,
As I open up my eyes.


Floria
© 2001

[This message has been edited by strbbux (12-31-2001 04:39 PM).]

© Copyright 2001 Floria Kelderhouse - All Rights Reserved
Irish Rose
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1 posted 2001-12-31 04:44 PM


Floria, your picture is lovely!   This is so much of how I feel this evening.  I enjoyed reading this very, very much.  Good to have you here.

I am/Kathleen/

strbbux
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2 posted 2001-12-31 04:55 PM


Thank you irish rose, I am so happy to be here. floria
Mac Attack
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3 posted 2001-12-31 05:23 PM


Wow. I really liked this.
strbbux
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4 posted 2001-12-31 05:28 PM


Thanks Mac, I see you are new, welcome, you will like it here. floria
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