Open Poetry #17 |
Another Chance In Time ...( a thank you for a friend) |
EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Another Chance In Time Well the time it came and went As the passings often do But there was more than just a thought For one as sweet as you The rhymes they filled the air With friendship and with love Of kisses sent from heaven On wings of angel dove So we raise our glasses high Filled with love's sweet wine And toast the of hope man For another chance in time And as the chorus rings out loud Through the deafening cheer My thoughts they slowly drift away Quietly wishing you were here |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Neatly done Eddie, filled with soft yearning. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
EagleOne, A nice write and I enjoyed the read. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
A beautiful poem to a friend written by the hand of one of gentle and loving heart. BRAVO!!! A wonderful write, Eddie. Your muse is free and flying high. HAPPY NEW YEAR. May your deepest desires become realities in the New Year. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
EagleOne~ Sweet Eddie ... I send you smiles across the miles~ May the New Year bring you more happiness than your heart can hold~ Bless you, my friend~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
How tender and sweet this is. Simply beautifully done. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautifully and tenderly penned Eddie. *Hugging you tight under the mistletoe* ~Nancy~ *~ Wishing everyone a New Year filled with Peace & Love ~* |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh my gosh, this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may hope always fill all our hearts and may we embrace all together in the spirit of chance and faith! (big hugggssssss) This is such a beautiful gift to your friend, sweet Eddie, we all love you so very much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is a keeper, Eddie, very tender. I am/Kathleen/ |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Eddie This was such a beautifully moving piece of writing that was so much enjoyed. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
What a lovely read to wake up to, Eddie. Thank you for sharing this with us. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
VERY SMOOTH and Fluid Writing!!!! So much revealed in these lines. Enjoyed this immensely. ***Ivy Rose |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Kethry ~ Thanks, I guess it was that kind of thought you get when you're missing a friend! Seymour ~ Thanks, glad you enjoyed. Karen ~ Thank you my friend, my muse rarely comes home to roost these days, perhaps that is the price of freedom. Take care! Marge ~ You can never have too many smiles my friend . Thank you, and may your new year be all that it can be, take care! Tracey ~ Thank you, I appreciate your comments. Nancy ~ Can't have too may hugs either , thanks. Noah ~ Without hope, we have nothing, thanks. Kathleen ~ one of those tender moments I guess, thank you my friend, take care! Sue ~ It's good to know you enjoyed, take care! Dee ~ I think one should be able to share their feelings with their friends, glad you enjoyed, take care! Ivy Rose ~ Good to know you enjoyed, take care! It's okay to shoot the moon ~ John Sebastian |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Eddie, thank you for sharing your lovely words to a friend. And wishing you a great new year. Take care, ME |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
So we raise our glasses high Filled with love's sweet wine And toast the of hope man For another chance in time An excellent write in tribute to a close friend. Thanks for sharing. Melton |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
hmm..this one has a familiar feel...i guess bringing in a new year tends to make one wish not to be alone..always good to have a friend or significant other along for a good hug and/or kiss... really great write eddie..! hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
M E ~ Thank you for reading, The very best to you also, take care! Melton ~ Yes, a good friend indeed, thank you! g ~ Yes it does, nothing like having your friends close by, thanks. Take care! It's okay to shoot the moon ~ John Sebastian |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I miss you too sweet friend |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Like this Eagle One...James |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Eddie, had to come back for another read. And push that library button that I forgot last time You know, I really love this. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Paula ~ Friends are always missed, you take care! James ~ Always good to know you like my efforts. Dee ~ You come back as often as you like my friend, take care! It's okay to shoot the moon ~ John Sebastian |
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