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You Are There Here With Me Lady W's challenge
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You Are There Here With Me Lady W's challenge |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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~ You Are There Here With Me ~ You are there, here with me Sitting so still so silently Your thoughts brush against me Like butterfly's wings softly I can see you so clearly You are right here with me You are there right beside me Sitting there so quietly Your mind touching me gently Like a well of soft memory I can hear you speak thoughtfully You are right here with me You are there so close to me Sitting there so noiselessly You touch me so calmly Like a star you glow so softly I can feel you there so peacefully You are right here with me You are there almost touching me Sitting there now invisibly You're holding me so tenderly Like a whisper so ethereally I can smell you so near to me You are right here with me You are there, here with me Sitting silent and quietly Your touch comforts me Like a song that flows in me I can feel you so totally You are there, here within me Marsha To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh my goodness, the challenge responses are rolling in. I must nudge Lady and get her in here to read these delightful poetic responses... and I think she needs to give more challenges more often! |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
MUSHY!! this is gorgeous, girl your pen sings!!  |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Marsha,how do you do it?you write such beautiful poems.     Juanita |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari darling girl, tell Lady to keep her challenges, this was too hard. I had to go for soft and quiet and I'm so NOT quiet. As you know (Don't you now!)  Love and warm stuff As always Puck Circe darling girl, thank you, I actually think it's a softer me but that is what I am now. I'm really a MUSHY Mushy nowadays, love I think suits me.  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Juanita darling girl Thank you, you are the one that writes sooooooooooooo beautifully. I think this is more pretty than beautiful. But it is very soft. Thanks darling girl, Happy Christmas Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet Marsha, you are so sweet and wonderful to us all! (sigh) Your gorgeous words of love always warm our hearts and brings cheers of delight to us all and brings smiles to our faces! (kiss on cheek) We love you so much, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) I too tried this challenge, I love it!!! (sigh) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
BRAVO!!!!  You did a magnificent job of it. The challenge suited you very well. I loved the gentle feel. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
This challenge is well taken, I do believe that this is the 3rd one that I have read and I have enjoyed them all. Opeth |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
when you take on a challenge love. . . you really make it your own. . . wonderfully done. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Kari....a truly beautiful write...You have done well...much enjoyed this.. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Marsha, look at you. This is probably one of your most tender writes to date. The here and there is important to you, this I know. Keep the thoughts close, dear Girl, and never, ever stop believing in magic! |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
And here's to the new Marsha... the former wench who is now a softie and writes gorgeous poetry in her soft lovely British accent copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Thank you one and all for reading and replying. I'm not very good at challenges you know, I have to work at them and I hate to have to work on anything, now you know I do. Thank you truly you all mean so much to me  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You'll come back to see who put this BTTT  ...methinks you need to read it again, in a whisper, to yourself... |
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