Dream The Fire...(another one for PdV's challenge)

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Open Poetry #17

Dream The Fire...(another one for PdV's challenge)

EagleOne
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since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

0 posted 2001-12-31 06:11 AM

Dream The Fire

Baby dream the fire
Can't you feel the flame?
Embrace with your desire
And dance with me in rain

Sweet soul's raging inferno
Rampant thoughts impart
Surely fate decrees it so
Be it lust or wayward heart

There'll be no more missing moments
Or memories lost in rhyme
We'll sweep away the sonnets
As we entwine ourselves in time

Dee
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since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

1 posted 2001-12-31 06:26 AM

Eddie, I think Janet's poet's envy is visiting me tonight. This is one of those poems I wish I had written.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

EagleOne
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since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

2 posted 2001-12-31 06:40 AM

Dee ~ poet envy is usually something I have

. Thank you my friend, take care!

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

3 posted 2001-12-31 06:57 AM

Memories intwined in time...lovely thoughts..HAPPY NEW YEAR to you Eddie..

~Victoria~

"To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides."
~ David Viscott

EagleOne
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since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

4 posted 2001-12-31 09:00 AM

Thank you Victoria, and a Happy New Year to you also.

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13

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High Springs, Florida

5 posted 2002-01-01 05:10 PM

"be it lust or wayward heart..." heh heh..
yeah baby!

you know i love this one eddie..thanks for wanting to share it with my e-inbox and me...

wonderful write..

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"life is that dance we do in the space between 'making it happen' & 'letting it happen'" marci

EagleOne
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since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

6 posted 2002-01-02 12:46 PM

g ~ I knew ya would!

Thanks.

It's okay to shoot the moon ~ John Sebastian

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13

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High Springs, Florida

7 posted 2002-01-03 09:02 PM

"dance with me in rain..."

just stopped in again....i'm liking the rain idea...

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

so many things i want to say to him..but i just placed a rose on his grave, and talked to the wind...
-tim mcgraw

EagleOne
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since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

8 posted 2002-01-06 04:11 PM

g ~

How could anyone not like the rain!

It's okay to shoot the moon ~ John Sebastian

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