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Read My Lips
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Read My Lips |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Read My Lips With fingertips brush my lips Let them Braille my core in sail Let them dip in taste the trip Let them baste my awes avail. Wonder the forest in glean See the rainbow in its hue Touch the phantoms in-between Fires of my senses true Sense my feel of agony Hollow of a starving soul Exquisite of ecstasy Craving of a wished for goal. Touch me with your fingertips Enter into fantasy Place your lips upon my lips Feel the taste of ecstasy. Play a moment on my fife Be a moment of my life. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Well you fired my senses with this, excellent! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
With fingertips brush my lips Let them Braille my core in sail Let them dip in taste the trip Let them baste my awes avail.  ===================================== Touch the phantoms in-between Fires of my senses true Sense my feel of agony Hollow of a starving soul ================================= Touch me with your fingertips Enter into fantasy Place your lips upon my lips Feel the taste of ecstasy. Play a moment on my fife Be a moment of my life. =================================== OH MAN ... HAVE MERCY ... me raspberry tea just boiled out of the mug rofl good grief Stinky...I got a tan off the slow burn on this one... how can something SO COOL be so hot   (could that first verse be any cooler) me thinks not..but knowing you.. YES!! *L* Talk about starting the new year out right *L* My oh my.... Sy oh Sy...SIGH OH SIGH Randy flies high and free and its a very groovy thing to see I gotta go get some iced tea LOL very very very cool Stinky...very  me |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sy, Sensual in every way. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
EagleOne, Thanks for the hot excellent. LOL JM, You have contained the forest fire. But the embers are still smoldering. LOL So glad you liked the poem. But I still feel I get to the edge of what I want to say and can't step over that last inch. WW R S |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Keth, We crossed, thank you for the sensual. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What a way to say goodbye to 2001, and hello to 2002... Sheesh...make it warm in here, will ya?...  |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* sensually Stunning. I absolutely love it. Combine it with full moons and the end of the year and we have feeling aflame that will light up the midnight skies. BRAVO!!!!**big hugs**  HAPPY NEW YEAR...May all your dreams come true.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
who needs coffee with poetry like this?! Seymour, this is so luscious! I like it when you write like this!!!  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Sy-babers, I have NO doubt you will cinch that last inch... and besides my Stinkylove... getting there is half the fun ... rofl Reve up Randy and enjoy the ride..we will enjoy the view *L*Read my lips Stinky ....  r*a*s*p*b*e*r*r*y**winkiewinkie* |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Dear Sey, As always, your work is so wonderful and fresh. Cor |
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Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
Very sweet and romantic. I enjoyed this very much! Randy Meador a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Mmmmmmmm...soooo beautifully sensual, sweet friend, may every moment of your life be filled with sheer blessings of loves kiss! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Touch me with your fingertips Enter into fantasy Place your lips upon my lips Feel the taste of ecstasy. Play a moment on my fife Be a moment of my life. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Heating up my New Year's Eve Sy! Great write...meet me under the mistletoe at midnight, Nancy! *~ Wishing everyone a New Year filled with Peace & Love ~* |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour, this is incredible, truly outstanding. Wonderful way to start the new year Thank you, I know just how you feel    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
I love this poem and the last two lines are wonderful. floria |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Oh yes! your lips are more than readable Sy, they are very kissable. Enjoyed this!! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Seymour - most lovely, but not what I expected after seeing the title... BC |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Thank you and Happy New Year, *L* Startime, Thank you for the bravo & Happy New Year, *L* Sea, Happy New Year & Thank you *L* JM, I'll not only read them but if you stand under the mistletoe I'll kiss them as well. WW R S Corinne, Happy New Year and thank you for the wonderful. *L* Noah, Have a happy and thank you. Nancy, Under the mistletoe, that's a date, have a happy New Year *L* Marsha, Have a Happy New Year and thank you. Stubbux, Thank you and Happy New Year. RosePetal,Happy New Year & thank you. *L* Bill, Well I started New Year a little early. LOL Have a Happy. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
 *winkiewinkie* [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (12-31-2001 08:20 PM).] |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sy, I'm gonna check with Isabel about the "feel the taste of ecstacy" line. If she verifies it, I may kiss you myself!! Nicely done, Sy! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Right back at ya. Love ya. Happy New Year. Balladeer, You wouldn't dare. LOL Happy New Year |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is so luscious, Seymour With fingertips brush my lips Let them Braille my core in sail Let them dip in taste the trip Let them baste my awes avail but I can't seem to picture Balladeer kissing you for it.  copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Oh My..................... !!!! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing Seymour...James |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
WOOOOOOOO HOOOOOOOO *L* me thinks ya blew the clapper off the bell with this one ROFL |
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