Open Poetry #17 |
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Dusty Rhodes Junior Member
since 2001-10-14
Posts 27 |
Secret smile crossing delicate lips Sideways glance of eyes saying all To match the blue line pulsating with life Tracing delicately down white neck Grace of hand as it moves in air With the softness of touch as it stops in rest Small laugh tingling with musical tones All these are treasures for my mind to keep In the times of depart, that is all there is To savor as the fragrance of a fresh bloomed rose Counting the hours until the return Warmed in the heart by the thoughts of you |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
This is exquisite! What a great first post. "Grace of hand as it moves in air With the softness of touch as it stops in rest" You have written some wonderful imagery here. Welcome, and please, share more of your beautiful poetry. |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Welcome and great write. Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I love your soft thoughts ..*s Welcome ~Wynter "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions Dusty Rhodes! What a beautifully enchanting first post ... I hope to read more! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful First Post! I'll be looking for your name again here at Passions! Memories of someone special wonderfully expressed. ~hugs, NancyLee~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! This is a wonderful way to enter your new home, with a poem that will suit every one's fancy... check your E-mail for a special Greeting! Karilea |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
A beautiful and graceful write here. Welcome! I look forward to more! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to our humble home. I really enjoyed this it's so lovely and gentle....I look forward to reading more of your work. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
WOW!!!Sensually romantic. Welcome to passions. I can see that I am going to love your writing all ready. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Wonderfully romantic with such beautifully painted images..... Welcome to Passions..... Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Dusty Rhodes Junior Member
since 2001-10-14
Posts 27 |
Thank you so much, Midnitesun for those kind words of welcome. Hopefully, I will post some more that you will enjoy Thank you for your welcome, Bernie, glad to be here Why, thank you, Wynter, I look forward to reading yours also Kit, what a nice thing to say, thank you. What a nice welcome, Nancy Lee, I appreciate your kind words Sunshine, thank you for the poem and welcome, it is very nice of you to do so. Serenity, thank you for your kind welcome. It is very kind of you to read this Poet de Vine, thank you for your welcome, very kind of you. Startime, what a wonderful thing for you to say, thank you so much. My Enchanted Melody, thank you for such kind words. I appreciate you taking the time for this read |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Welcome to Passions, Dusty Rose. This is a lovely first post, romantic and hopefilled! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
welcome to Passions, look forward to reading more. Kathleen (Kay) |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Dusty Rhodes, This is awesome work and so full of wonderful imagery, welcome to Passions and I look forward to more of your poetry. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
What a lovely entrance you have made to passions. A big welcome to you If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Welcome to Passions. Very lovely piece. Will look forward to reading more. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
One might say You have a marvelous way with words... |
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Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
One might just say what someone said above. You have a wonderous way with words. I love this. How did this get buried? I am many. |
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