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Open Poetry #17

Succubus, Muse

craigrk
Member

since 2001-12-23

Posts 123

0 posted 2001-12-31 07:52 AM

Succubus, Muse

I have not written
as one banished,
amnesiaed by the promise
of a letter to a
one-night stand,
but writhing in insomnia
With dull subconscious lust.

Zigzagged, diverted
like one from a lover,
the aberration,
the mistress,
years of wandering,
falling from your fever
in frozen perverted trance.

Wanting now that lustful sweat,
the dew to form on my lips,
the dawn to capture my loins,
thrust me back to the
flush dead of night
woods by your bonfire.

I succumb to the pungent imagery.
Your wetness. Your nonchalance.
Your flesh as mouth and tutor.

dieadra
New Member

since 2001-12-31

Posts 4

1 posted 2001-12-31 03:31 PM

Will remember this one.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2001-12-31 03:35 PM

......Ooooooh yes.....

*~ Wishing everyone a New Year filled with Peace & Love ~*

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2001-12-31 03:52 PM

There is nothing nonchalant about this piece...it is a fine piece of work, and a veritable keeper...

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

4 posted 2001-12-31 04:20 PM

This is nice, I didnt understand your other post but I sure do this one. And i see by reading more than one of your poems that you have your own style. I like it. floria

dieadra
New Member

since 2001-12-31

Posts 4

5 posted 2001-12-31 08:14 PM

Just wanted to add that I read a lot of poetry and this is the most intense i've read lately. thanks again.

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