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serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

0 posted 2001-12-31 03:43 AM

Lascivious
latino beat
hot pavement
burning
soles of feet
fingers spread
in yearning greet
hip-to-hips
that never meet...

Tongue in circle,
lips too dry
a silent knowing
in my eye
jingle-jangle
on my feet
chains
of dangle
past my knee...

ribbons
bind my wrist
entwined
and my foot
as well
in thyme...
flame and shadow,
serpentine
remains
in ash
I left
behind...

simple
silences
succinct

simple
grinding
of my teeth

"sssssssssss--"

(she whispers)

"SALSA!"

screams...

[This message has been edited by serenity (12-31-2001 05:24 AM).]

amusemi
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

1 posted 2001-12-31 04:37 AM

Cool write! I like this:

simple
silences
succinct
simple
grinding
of my teeth

It's a great cadence.

craigrk
Member

since 2001-12-23

Posts 123

2 posted 2001-12-31 07:41 AM

Very hot. enjoyed the read. thanks.

EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

3 posted 2001-12-31 08:56 AM

It's cool, it's hot, it's excellent!

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

4 posted 2001-12-31 09:30 AM

PICANTE!!!

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

5 posted 2001-12-31 09:33 AM

I like it!

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2001-12-31 09:59 AM

Serenity,
Hot salsa, LOL enjoyed. *L*

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

7 posted 2001-12-31 11:25 AM

Hot Salsa, cool poem. I like this a lot Karen.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

8 posted 2001-12-31 08:13 PM

ribbons
bind my wrist
entwined
and my foot
as well
in thyme...
flame and shadow,
serpentine
remains
in ash
I left
behind...
==============================

OK..first Sy and now you...
you guys have been in me raspberry tea havent you

WHEW baby...you just steamed my tamalies ROFL
this is one red hot candle dance me girlie..
this is one VERY COOL POEM...love the intensity and the imagery...

in thyme...
flame and shadow,
serpentine
remains
in ash
I left
behind

talk about a moth anthem

whew...
yeah baby..smoke and ash. lol
Im bringing the Doritos..we can wash it down with rhyme water(cajun spice) *WINKIE*

me

When your own emptiness is all thats getting through
there comes a point when youre not sure why youre still talking...
I passed that point long ago

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2001-12-31 08:25 PM

Mmmmmmmmm...caliente....I love it!!! (smiles) The beauty of flamenco and gypsy spirit fills your words, sweet friend, this is a lively beautiful poem, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet amigo, I love it! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

10 posted 2001-12-31 08:28 PM

Oooh hot and spicy!

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