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Touch Me ( for Poet deVine's challenge )
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Touch Me ( for Poet deVine's challenge ) |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... 
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
What have you done? Written a beautiful, lyrical poem in such a view words and met the challenge!!! Sigh! This is lovely sir.  Into the library! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
EagleOne, If I could write like this with such brevity and depth...I would give up work and write. *Soft Smile* Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
EagleOne: Wait a minute - I am swooning and have to come down from a fabulous high to write this reply. Fantastic. This one is a keeper. |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
EagleOne, This one really touched me in way the others didn't. There's a certain quality about it that makes one feel needed. Wow... well written.  _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Feel me Tremble Throughout the weave Love me Eternal My soul, it heaves Know me Justly Won't you believe? ============================== Well, you make me believe  this is lovely Poet Eddie... I mean POET Eddie LOL a wonderful weaving of words.. love your rhyme scheme in this. well done POET SIR (so do you believe me yet) haha *wink* later-you-are-a-poet-gator lol jm When your own emptiness is all thats getting through |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* oh yes......you met the challenge with a poem to touch the heart and soul. I love it, Eddie. **hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
nothing like taking my heart and melting it completely......*SIGH* this is beyond romantic....really |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh gawd.....this made me tremble!..... *~ Wishing everyone a New Year filled with Peace & Love ~* |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Now I'll have two Touch Me poems in my folder, this one and my own. I really like the brevity of this. You say so much in so few words. Well done, EagleOne!  Keep those fires are under control. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Wow... I am loving the pieces of Sharon's challenge. The short lines of this poem made it that much more breathtaking... very nicely-written! I loved this... thanks so much for sharing it with us. --Marie "It's been a long December, and there's reason to believe that maybe this year will be better than the last." (Counting Crows) |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
EagleOne...If this is a challenge poem...I like it very much. You've touched me with your words. ***Ivy Rose |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is so good. Lots of love here. Sandra |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh my gosh, this is sooooooo beautiful, may she forever embrace your heart with the beauty of true love! (big hugggsssss) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, this is the perfect challenge response! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I am truly humbled, and overwhelmed, by your replies, I thank you each and every one. Poet deVine ~ To be in your library is an honour. Glad you enjoyed. Kethry ~ AS long as you don't give up writing, thank you my friend. Ariana ~ I don't know how to reply to that except to say thank you. Mon Cherie ~ Yes, this was written with that need, I'm glasd it has shown through. Thanks. Janet ~ I Believe, I believe, honest! lol. Glad you enjoyed, take care! Karen ~ There seems to be lots of sighs around the forums lately glad you like it, take care!Sea ~ Wow, what can I say to that, glad to have toched your heart, take care! Enchantress ~ You sure your not just cold? Thanks, I appreciate your comments, take care!Midnitesun ~ Well I'm generally a man of few words, thank you Marie ~ Thank you for reading, glad you enjoyed. Ivy Rose ~ Its an honour to know my words can reach out and touch another, thank you. Sandra ~ Thank you, glad you enjoyed. I had lots of inspiration for this. Noah ~ She does, each and every day. Thanks for stopping by. |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Wow, you made this old lady feel some things I thought were dead. Beautiful and have a happy new year. ME |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Now, Eddie, look what you gone and did to sweet Mother Earth!!!! This is lovely. And thank you for the Christmas card, I wish you a very Happy New Year and be gentle with yourself! I am/Kathleen/ |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
M E ~ Well you've got me there, I can't answer that , you take care!Kathleen ~ You know me, I always look after myself lol. A great new year for you also, thanks for stopping by |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Eddie, you never cease to amaze me with your words. Short but to the point...and very touching I love it, definitely for the library.Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
The amazement is mutual Dee, an honour to be in your library, take care! |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Wow, someone is well inspired!! Beautiful poem, I’m sure she does believe. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Tracey ~ I've had some wonderful inspiration of late, thanks for stopping by! It's okay to shoot the moon ~ John Sebastian |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
Feel me Tremble... Love me Eternal... Know me Justly... Won't you believe? ================================== some deep requests in so little words...they are fair requests... believe? would be nearly impossible not to....much enjoy this one friend eddie... hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I’m glad you enjoyed my friend, and yes, there are some deep thoughts in this one, take care! It's okay to shoot the moon ~ John Sebastian |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I believe...always have |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Keep the dream Paula It's okay to shoot the moon ~ John Sebastian |
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