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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(This is for my dream girl...Joanna) Her By: Noah Eaton 12/16/00 She encircles me in my fantasies The way she shimmers and smiles leaves me breathless and weak When she walks right by me, I sigh deeply as her hair sways in the air She is the one I love, I want to share my world with her She lights my heart with a warm instant spark True love incinerates between us, but the flame feels soft and tender She touches me, a warmtickling breeze gently caresses through me Loves magic has brought us together, I will love her forever I look into her light angels face, light shines from her eyes and shines onto me A light that I never felt from anyone before, which dove right through me She kisses me, her breath soothes through me, a magic more beautiful than fairy dust Spins around me and her, as she holds me, comet tails swim around us in this magic moment She gently locks her lips with mine, under the heavenly amethyst twilight She lays me down on the grass, near a deep crystal lake Our bodies are attached together, me and my love safe and warm together in each others arms We become one together, we’ll always be together forever, me and her I will always hold you close to me, as we swing together on the vines of life Across the canyons of life, I will never let you go as we swing from one side to the other I will hold your hand on the path to riches Together, we will share a love that will bring us to the seventh heaven When she’s holding me in her arms, I feel joyful and free As we take care of each others heart, we know we’ve found a hidden star deep within us That never dims, it shines much brighter than any other star we’ve seen Every day, every night, all my life, I will always love her… I love her… I love her… [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (12-30-2001 09:12 PM).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Sounds like a dream walking! I am/Kathleen/ |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
HEAVENLY, NOAH!!!! Your visions of love, your lovely dreams light up the heart, inspire the soul. ****Ivy Rose |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
There you go, a lovely and thoughtfully done romantic poem!  |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Noah, this is soooooooo romantic.... she is lucky, I'm telling you I hope you stay this romantic always  |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Noah: Don't ever change your thinking about love because it is all that you wrote plus more. Your writing is beautiful and your words are heart felt. Really enjoyed it. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Noah - this has to be quite a woman... Very warm, very loving.... BC |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
This is so beautiful!! Can I pretend its for me ?? *sniff* (haha). I hope she has a copy of this with her at all times so she can be reminded of how lucky she is. ~beth ann |
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~lewisone~ Member
since 2001-11-23
Posts 91Virginia |
Well.....1&1=2 Sounds like you were lucky enough to find real love, and she's darn lucky to have found you....You romantic devil  Beautiful work!~lewisone~  |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Noah...I am speechless! You can really see into and steal a woman's heart you know. She is a lucky gal. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Lovely Noah..Isnt love grand..Happy New Year you romantic you ha..written from the heart..  ~Victoria~ "To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides." |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Oh Noah, this is so romantic. I hope she knows how lucky she is to hsve someone like you. May your love last forever. And, a Happy New Year to you too. |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Noah, so much love and romance in your heart. beautiful, as always. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
oh my God! This one somehow snuck past me, I didn't see it until now! Noah, it is sooo beautiful! wow I stir up all these wonderful emotions in you?!?! Someday you are going to make some woman happy for the rest of her life! I would love it if it was ME : ) RP |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Looks like you have lots of romantic bones in your body...James |
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