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ecrivan
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0 posted 2001-12-31 01:23 AM


How long can the bliss of a kiss linger
how long can the kiss extend its finger
how long does the brushing of tactile sensors stay
before the bliss of a lingered kiss wanes and blows away.

how much do lips have to pucker before the kiss is done rightly
how much puckering should you do before the oral exercise is unsightly,
have you exercised in the mirror to see how the lips merge?
have you applied your pucker on a cheek to see the effects scourged?

what of a faint kiss, it leaves no trace,
what of that hint left shyly on a first date,
what of the 'boldly grasped in the arms' smooch,
totally on center, without room for her brooch.

think of the consequences of your oral display,
how your consort might get turned off, in short delay,
weigh your options on a careful approach
love is simply always a difficult topic to broach.




[This message has been edited by ecrivan (12-31-2001 02:06 AM).]

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Midnitesun
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1 posted 2001-12-31 02:01 AM


A delightful treatise on the kiss. I enjoyed the read.
ecrivan
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2 posted 2001-12-31 02:05 AM


Took the reading of a short story write to get this going..topic: the length of a kiss.
Happy New Year Midnitesun


amusemi
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3 posted 2001-12-31 04:31 AM


Interesting piece.  I think it's cool!  You know there's always that uncomfortable moment when your not sure if you should continue or quit.  I don't think I've ever thought this much about this subject.  Great write!

I'll probably crack up the next time I kiss someone, you know!

Beki
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4 posted 2001-12-31 05:26 AM


thought provoking for sure!
Mac Attack
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5 posted 2001-12-31 09:23 AM


Just a reminder... if you want success, don't forget the tic tacs!

ecrivan
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6 posted 2001-12-31 11:39 AM


Hello Mac,

Those tic- tacks what a relief!Welcome aboard
you'll be surprised at the gambit of smilies and need logos around.

Amusemi,

so it goes with the kiss, now to do the slap, lol


Beki,

thanks for your reply.


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