Open Poetry #17 |
Bliss of the Kiss |
ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
How long can the bliss of a kiss linger how long can the kiss extend its finger how long does the brushing of tactile sensors stay before the bliss of a lingered kiss wanes and blows away. how much do lips have to pucker before the kiss is done rightly how much puckering should you do before the oral exercise is unsightly, have you exercised in the mirror to see how the lips merge? have you applied your pucker on a cheek to see the effects scourged? what of a faint kiss, it leaves no trace, what of that hint left shyly on a first date, what of the 'boldly grasped in the arms' smooch, totally on center, without room for her brooch. think of the consequences of your oral display, how your consort might get turned off, in short delay, weigh your options on a careful approach love is simply always a difficult topic to broach. [This message has been edited by ecrivan (12-31-2001 02:06 AM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
A delightful treatise on the kiss. I enjoyed the read. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Took the reading of a short story write to get this going..topic: the length of a kiss. Happy New Year Midnitesun |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Interesting piece. I think it's cool! You know there's always that uncomfortable moment when your not sure if you should continue or quit. I don't think I've ever thought this much about this subject. Great write! I'll probably crack up the next time I kiss someone, you know! |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
thought provoking for sure! |
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Mac Attack Member
since 2001-12-12
Posts 100Ontario, Canada |
Just a reminder... if you want success, don't forget the tic tacs! |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Hello Mac, Those tic- tacks what a relief!Welcome aboard you'll be surprised at the gambit of smilies and need logos around. Amusemi, so it goes with the kiss, now to do the slap, lol Beki, thanks for your reply. |
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