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craigrk
Member

since 2001-12-23

Posts 123

0 posted 2001-12-28 11:24 AM

On a couch made of clouds
like a mist in a dream
it will come to you
and you will hasten -
in shoes made of dusk
running you headlong
into the dark,
trampling unseen,
out of control
toward an intuition.

Stars crisp against
the black sky
will melt the brown
low clouds like butter
so the worm moon
can point you
to my ashes.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2001-12-28 11:26 AM

like a mist in a dream......

This line stands out. Nice write, welcome to passions. *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

2 posted 2001-12-28 11:26 AM

This is an excellent poem to make your entrance! The images are wonderful.
Welcome!

I am/Kathleen/

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2001-12-28 11:28 AM

"running you headlong
into the dark,
trampling unseen,
out of control
toward an intuition"

very cool images you present to us in your first post.....very nice

Welcome!!!

Opeth
Senior Member

since 2001-12-13

Posts 1543
The Ravines

4 posted 2001-12-28 11:54 AM

That was cool. Welcome aboard.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

5 posted 2001-12-28 12:15 PM

Stars crisp against
the black sky
will melt the brown
low clouds like butter
so the worm moon
can point you
to my ashes.
============================

wonderful ethereal imagery here...very cool mystic write...
Welcome to Poetry Land Craig!!
nice to have you here with us..I look forward to more of your work.

When your own emptiness is all thats getting through,
there comes a point when youre not sure why youre still talking...I passed that point long ago.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2001-12-28 12:33 PM

Very nice first post!
I will be looking for more of your work.
~Hugs, Nancy Lee~

*~ Wishing everyone a New Year filled with Peace & Love ~*

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

7 posted 2001-12-28 02:23 PM

Great poem...welcome!

Poet deVine

Administrator

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since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

8 posted 2001-12-28 05:51 PM

Welcome to our humble home!! I really enjoyed your first poem and look forward to reading more from you. Please check your email for a special greeting!

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

9 posted 2001-12-28 06:20 PM

Welcome. I will look for more poetry from you, usually at night. I enjoyed this:
"in shoes made of dusk
running you headlong
into the dark,"

LadyShadowWalker
Junior Member

since 2001-12-27

Posts 15
Minnesota, USA

10 posted 2001-12-28 06:27 PM

Very intriguing. The details are divine. It is really good. :-) I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.

--Lady

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

11 posted 2001-12-30 08:57 AM

Ah...I've found your first post. My hunch was right...I AM going to enjoy reading you...

in shoes made of dusk......

You have a talent...

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

12 posted 2001-12-30 11:35 AM

Welcome to Passions...mists and dreams always make me think of the magic of love. I love the way you put this poem together. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

13 posted 2001-12-30 12:56 PM

craig--

"trampling unseen,
out of control
toward an intuition."

There is a mystic feel to this, more spirit filled then dark...much enjoyed. Welcome to Passions!

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

14 posted 2001-12-30 03:23 PM

I'm a bit late here, but a wonderful first post. A big welcome to you.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

craigrk
Member

since 2001-12-23

Posts 123

15 posted 2001-12-31 11:31 AM

Thanks for all the kind words of encouragement. I feel very welcomed.

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