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Marsha
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0 posted 2001-12-30 10:03 PM



~ Write A Letter To My Love ~

Post Script Poet D’Vine Challenge

Write a letter to my love now that’s something I can do
I’d fill a hundred pages with the love I feel for you
I’d write the words I love you in letters etched in fire
Then I’d fill a few more pages with the tale of our desire
Fire, ardour, flames, burn whenever you touch me
And write words of passion that flares so constantly
But the thing that makes this special and so very true
Are the trust and love that flow so tenderly from you

I’d write the words of love spilling in rivers from my heart
And promise faithfully that we’ll never be kept apart
Each word is just a tiny piece there’s really so much more
Look in my heart and then you'll see that I can truly soar
Magic, wonder, awe anoint me with their touch
Then add words of delight that I crave so very much
But the thing that makes this special and so very true
Are the trust and love that flow so constantly from you

To write words in a letter that speaks love loud and clear
I’d fill a thousand pages telling you I hold you dear
Engraved in words of gold etched deep within my soul
The words that tell of love and how you made me whole
Desire, passion, fire, they all play their various part
But none of them can describe how much is in my heart
But the thing that makes this special and so very true
Are the trust and love that flow eternally from me to you


Marsha

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


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1 posted 2001-12-30 10:08 PM


Mushy~

"I’d write the words of love spilling in rivers from my heart
And promise faithfully that we’ll never be kept apart
Each word is just a tiny piece there’s really so much more
Look in my heart and then you'll see that I can truly soar"


wow!! I am telling you, this is absolutely gorgeous!! How wonderful Marsha, I loved this!!!


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2 posted 2001-12-30 11:37 PM


Marsha - I could post a thousand replies to tell how splendid this write is, but I just don't have the time, so one will have to do.
  Very good.  

By the way, could you spare one page of love and send it my way, I could use all the help I can get.

Dave

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3 posted 2001-12-31 06:32 AM


Marsha, this is a lovely tribute. I hope he appreciates all that writing you plan to do.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.     a brand

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4 posted 2001-12-31 09:48 AM


Mushy,
any man would fall at your feet, (if that is where you want them) after reading this magnificent write.

Love and slushy stuff.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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5 posted 2001-12-31 10:05 AM


Marsha,
Well you convinced me but I am but parifery.
Enjoyed.

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6 posted 2001-12-31 01:38 PM


Mushy - geez, you do write from the heart, and with feeling...

BC

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7 posted 2001-12-31 01:50 PM


"To write words in a letter that speaks love loud and clear
I’d fill a thousand pages telling you I hold you dear
Engraved in words of gold etched deep within my soul
The words that tell of love and how you made me whole
Desire, passion, fire, they all play their various part."





(smiles) Oh my gosh, this is sooooooo beautiful, you are sooooooo romantic and the beauty of true love glistens from your golden heart! (smiles) May the trust and faith of love forever light your spirit, sweet friend, this is sooooooo beautiful! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing!



May love and light alwyas shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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8 posted 2002-01-02 10:03 PM


Circe darling girl thank you muchly, actually I only wrote this because Keth nagged me into doing it. And then she made me cry. I'm glad you love it darling girl, I think I suit the softer side don't you?

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


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9 posted 2002-01-02 10:11 PM


Dave darling boy well you know how much I appreciate a reply from you. So one will certainly do. Thank you muchly

And I'll spare as many pages as you like darling boy, when do you want them?

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


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10 posted 2002-01-02 10:19 PM


Dee thank you, although in all likelyhood he'd say Marsha why didn't you use the phone.....

No not really........... I hope

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


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11 posted 2002-01-02 10:35 PM


Keth darling sister of my soul, you utter wretch. You bamboozled me into writing it then stroll off with the prize without a second thought. Now is that kind darling sister? How many times must I say this? The only way that I can win is to cheat So I'm just going to have to let the secret out the bag... It's no use you telling them I'm lying they won't believe you because I look so sweet and innocent. (Well, you know I do)
Actually Keth didn't write all her wonderful poetry, it was me, yes it's true it was me I gave her the words, they were just a few I had laying about, I told her which order to put them in and everything. All she did was sign it, so you see naturally the poems that have Keths name on them are actually mine.
There my darling girl that should cook your goose
And it's no use complaining now, this is penance for making me cry.
Oh! hush you everyone knows I love and adore you darling sister mine. No one is daft enough to read and believe this rubbish anyway. Who except the real readers come to the archives?

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


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12 posted 2002-01-02 10:42 PM


Seymour thank you I'm pleased you liked it, as for convincing him, he knows. I think he already knows.

If not he has a tiny inkling

:Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

     
  

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


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13 posted 2002-01-02 10:49 PM


Bill darling boy, thank you, I don't know about writing my heart, Keth conned me into writing this, and then has the cheek to swan off with the crown.

She used my words though, I had some spare ones lying about, and she slipped in and whipped them before I could blink. It's okay I'll get my revenge, just call me Nemesis. I could stand in for the daughter of night, she and I are old friends.


:Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

     
  

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


Marsha
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14 posted 2002-01-02 10:52 PM


Noah darling boy thank you muchly. YOU are the wizard when it comes to writing. This is just something that I was nagged into doing.

I'm pleased you love it. I quiet like some of it

:Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

     
  

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


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