Open Poetry #17 |
December's Song |
seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
December’s Song A symphony of winter’s lace, Lilting day and evening long, Wrapped in a blanket of icy warmth, I sway to December’s song. Held captive like a maiden new, Frozen notes that bind my feet. Yet mind and soul dance in frigid dew, In time to December’s beat. Skeletal branches etched in glass, Reaching to me, my partner bows, In winds that echo a lovers pain, I spin as December howls. Over lakes once pristine in summer sun, Through meadows remnants, cold and bleak, Down lanes with carpet of snowflakes spun, To deathbed shores of twisted creek. There I stop, chilled feet still, Though still I stay not very long, As a fresh cascading tymphany, Takes me away in December’s song. © Copyright 2001 Sandra Hoisington - All Rights Reserved |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I enjoyed your song greatly, well done! It's okay to shoot the moon ~ John Sebastian |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sandra, Beautifully penned and thoroughly enjoyed, Nancy. *Happy New Year to You and Yours* *~ Wishing everyone a New Year filled with Peace & Love ~* |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sandra, this is a delightful, fulfilling read...I know! I've heard the December winds...you have done them justice, so much so, IWIHWT...truly... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seraphin~ Such a lovely, lovely song of December~ I appreciated this read VERY much~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
So like the song of God's Seraphim. Very well-written and very beautiful. ***Ivy Rose |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Seraphin, this wintery poem just warmed my heart. Wonderfully written. Floria |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
I thank you all. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
let the song sing Sandra. . . this flows very well, although not as cold, as the winds here today. . . excellent. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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