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Marsha
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0 posted 2001-12-30 08:53 PM



~ My Darling Man ~

My darling man, I start to write the words begin to flow
My beloved one so true and dear you set my heart aglow
The words race across the page inscribed in passions ink
My writing flowing easily across this sheet in pink
We’ll never know another parting, together we will be
For as I’m yours then you are mine we’re bound eternally
No wind or rain no sleet or snow can keep us far apart
And as I send this letter love I’ll also send my heart

My dearest heart I write some more the words flow ever on
My only one I know for sure our love will n’er be gone
My heart you hold within your grasp my soul waits with you
And though my body must be here I swear that I’ll be true
There’ll be no intruders at my gate I’ll let no others in
For this I promise faithfully I will n’er commit that sin
I have been unfaithful in the past yes that much is true
But I will spend the rest of time simply loving you

My hearts desire I write the words flowing from my heart
My love you are the only one and of me you are a part
No road too long or sea too wide I’d cross the mountains high
And one day soon my darling man you’ll feel again my sigh
No matter what no matter when my heart belongs to you
It matters not the cost to me I promise I’ll be true
If ever I should fail you if I once forget this vow
I'll return again to you I’ll manage that somehow

Marsha


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


© Copyright 2001 Marsha Grace Melody Todd - All Rights Reserved
Startime
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1 posted 2001-12-30 09:16 PM


What a wonderful promise from your heart. This is incredibly beautiful. I love it. **hugs** HAPPY NEW YEAR, Marsha.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Irish Rose
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2 posted 2001-12-30 09:17 PM


He's one lucky fella!

I am/Kathleen/

Enchantress
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3 posted 2001-12-30 09:26 PM


Beautiful Marsha!  I'd say a challenge well met!  Lucky man!  All the best in 2002!
~Hugs, Nancy~

*~ Wishing everyone a New Year filled with Peace & Love ~*

ecrivan
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4 posted 2001-12-30 09:39 PM


Nice romantic stuff, he's a lucky man!! You're welcome to read my Whole Holes a neat play on the combination of the words on page 6. Happy New Year!


Paula Finn
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5 posted 2001-12-30 09:42 PM


Wonderful sister mine...simply wonderful
Poet deVine
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6 posted 2001-12-30 10:05 PM


I would think ANY man would love such a letter as this!

Challenge well met! Into my library.

Bill Charles
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7 posted 2001-12-30 11:24 PM


Mushy - you do write with your heart. A lucky guy...

BC

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8 posted 2001-12-31 12:20 PM


Marsha - You are certainly writing a lot of love letters these days.  Hey, that can't be bad thing, though.lol  Nice write.

Dave

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9 posted 2001-12-31 09:59 AM


Marsha,
I love it when you write your heart, instead of ...
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Tracey
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10 posted 2001-12-31 11:35 AM


What a gorgeous love letter Marsha. You are indeed lucky to have found such an incredible love. This is wonderful.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Sunshine
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11 posted 2001-12-31 04:55 PM



No questions here...seal, stamp and send!

Madame Chipmunk
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12 posted 2001-12-31 09:04 PM


Beautifully done, Marsha...
A lovely love letter for the one you love.
Happy New Year!

copyright2001 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Mac Attack
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13 posted 2002-01-01 11:54 AM


Marsha, you have me so curious!  How does he reply????

Marsha
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14 posted 2002-01-01 12:03 PM


My dearest friends and family, thank you for reading and replying. This only came about because Keth nagged me into doing it. And I still say her Dear John is a thousand times better.

Frankly I believe that everyone's love letters are better. The only merit this has is that it is written with heart's ink and soul's passion. Otherwise it's not that good. I know it I

However, be that as it may, I'd like to take this moment to say..... I do love you each and everyone, may your loves be wonderful, your hearts full of cheer and may I speak with you always throughout the coming year. (Yes, Keth it rhymes, I can't help it)


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


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