Open Poetry #17 |
The bearer of his soul |
walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
You gave all he took all then he disappeared within the crowd Your alone you face yourself you dry your tears you swear never to forgive him Then one day your compassion takes its toll You change your views you take him back Again becoming the bearer of his soul [This message has been edited by walker (12-29-2001 06:15 PM).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I never forgive.......(ok I do, everybody but one~ my ex) very sad, but fantastic write, on an emotional level, I understand this |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Yep, sometimes you just gotta write it like it is. I'm learning to do that. This is a good write. I am/Kathleen/ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Walker, I think you just walked over my heart with your truth. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Walker, I think you just walked over my heart with your truth. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) So very wonderfully expressed, sweet friend, it is such a painful thing to forgive in these situations, for betrayal can always harm a heart again and saying sorry doesn't usually ean too much. (sigh) I can relate to these feelings, sweet friend, I hope these are feelings that no longer apply to you! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
We can be so smart in some ways and so dumb in others...who hasn't been there? I like the way you say it..... |
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