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walker
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since 2001-02-11
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0 posted 2001-12-29 06:12 PM



You gave all
he took all
then  
he disappeared
within the crowd
Your alone
you face yourself
you dry your tears
you swear never
to forgive him
Then one day
your compassion takes
its toll
You change your views
you take him back
Again becoming
the bearer of his soul

[This message has been edited by walker (12-29-2001 06:15 PM).]

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1 posted 2001-12-29 06:29 PM


I never forgive.......(ok I do, everybody but one~ my ex) very sad, but fantastic write, on an emotional level, I understand this
Irish Rose
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2 posted 2001-12-29 10:05 PM


Yep, sometimes you just gotta write it like it is.  I'm learning to do that. This is a good write.

I am/Kathleen/

Kethry
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3 posted 2001-12-29 10:12 PM


Walker,
I think you just walked over my heart with your truth.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Kethry
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4 posted 2001-12-29 10:13 PM


Walker,
I think you just walked over my heart with your truth.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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5 posted 2001-12-29 10:27 PM




(sigh) So very wonderfully expressed, sweet friend, it is such a painful thing to forgive in these situations, for betrayal can always harm a heart again and saying sorry doesn't usually ean too much. (sigh) I can relate to these feelings, sweet friend, I hope these are feelings that no longer apply to you! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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6 posted 2001-12-30 12:23 PM


We can be so smart in some ways and so dumb in others...who hasn't been there? I like the way you say it.....
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