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Hello (PoetdeVines challange) |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida 
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Hello ~*~ I look into the eye of heavens sky it's you I can't deny. It burns, yet I go. I'll seek you as my shade, a comfort in the heat, tho at times it's bitter sweet. Words on paper seem surreal, but I know what I feel. The stars will shine after we cease but intertwined, our souls will be. That is why~ you are my man Love, me BloomingRose |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Stunning. I absolutely love this poem. Powerful and filled with love. **hugs** Challange very well met. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
very romantic.....soft and full of love...challenge met very nice  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Words on paper seem surreal, but I know what I feel. The stars will shine after we cease but intertwined, our souls will be. ======================= Deb ... this is superb...what a lovely write of devotion wrapped in rhyme divine... and written with your gift of brevity and succinctity...no words wasted...yet the imagery and emotions are well defined. well done poetess Rose  Happy New Year jm When your own emptiness is all thats getting through |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Debra, this is very beautiful and so full of love. I'm trying to find the original challenge to see what it is we were asked to do....wish someone would point me in the right direction. ~Hugs, Nancy~ *~ Wishing everyone a New Year filled with Peace & Love ~* |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Debra, this is sooooooo beautiful, I love it! (sigh) May the stars of the heavens forever shine in your heart with the shimmering of true love! (kiss on cheek) Soooooooo romantic, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Debra, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
BloomingRose, this is indeed a beautiful write! Very nicely done. I enjoyed it! Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Beautiful penned!! Charisma |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
How could he NOT love this!!?? It's beautiful. Challenge well met! I'm putting this into my library.  |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
The stars will shine after we cease but intertwined, our souls will be. BloomingRose - This a very romantic and passionate write. Nicely done. Dave |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Star~ Thank you *hugs* Sea~ You are always so sweet... thank you. Janet~ Thank you for a very warm reply. Nancy~ Thank you glad you enjoyed. Looking forward to reading yours. Noah~ **Hugs**... thank you much. Saunia~ Thank you Charisma~ So glad you like this. DeVine~ Thank you for the challenge. It was fun. Glad you like my poem. Dave~ Thank you. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Hello Blooming Rose, Challenge well met. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
BloomingRose - a beautiful writing to someone special. Well done! BC |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Excellent! |
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