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Ivy Rose
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since 2001-12-29
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0 posted 2001-12-29 01:37 PM



Breath of Lebanon~~~
your love-whispers
breathe upon my heart
the fragility, the beauty
of Love's caress.
Just the hint of a breeze
is rustling through
the Cedar trees;
and my heart catches
from the touch,
the soft, kiss
of your trembling lips.

Breath of Lebanon~~~
you search me out
finding the openness
of my heart and soul.
Coming gently into
my presence smiling,
filled with joy; and I am held
in the grasp of your fingers,
in wonder of unspoken
words.  You breathe upon me
essence of rose-passion,
fragrant flesh of promise.

O', Breath of Lebanon~~~
you sweep across my body,
my soul...with spirit whisperings,
Love's desiring passion-tears.

© Copyright 2001 Ivy Rose - All Rights Reserved
Tim
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1 posted 2001-12-29 01:39 PM


wonderful poetry. Enjoyed much.
Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2001-12-29 01:41 PM




(sigh) Oh my gosh, am I ever so happy to see you here, I always love you and your lovely words, this is sheer beauty of romance! (kiss on cheek) Welcome to Passions, sweet Ivy, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, I look forward to reading more of your poetry and your responses to our wonderful family of poets!



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Saunni
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3 posted 2001-12-29 01:50 PM


Ivy, a great write to start Passions with. This is incredible and beyond beautiful! It's easy to see the talent you have within you. I am looking forward to reading more of yours. Thanks for sharing.

Sauni @~~~>~~

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Not On Us, But In Us
The River Flows Not Past,
But Through Us

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2001-12-29 02:08 PM



Wonderful First Post!
I shall be looking for more of your work!
~Hugs, Nancy Lee~

*~ Wishing everyone a New Year filled with Peace & Love ~*

Janet Marie
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5 posted 2001-12-29 02:18 PM


Coming gently into
my presence smiling,
filled with joy; and I am held
in the grasp of your fingers,
in wonder of unspoken
words.  You breathe upon me
essence of rose-passion,
fragrant flesh of promise.

O', Breath of Lebanon~~~
you sweep across my body,
my soul...with spirit whisperings,
Love's desiring passion-tears.
=============================

my goodness this is lovely...
a passionate poetically beautiful write of imagery and emotion.
Welcome to Poetry Land Ivy Rose (cool pen name)
I look quite forward to more of your work,
Happy New Year
jm

When your own emptiness is all thats getting through
there comes a point when youre not sure why youre still talking...
I passed that point long ago

Tracey
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6 posted 2001-12-29 02:55 PM


This is so tenderly romantic. A beautiful entrance into passions. A big welcome, I think you will like it here. I look forward to seeing more from you.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
7 posted 2001-12-29 03:03 PM


Welcome to our humble cyber-abode!!! This is a magnificent poem with a flow and beauty that speaks to me. I look forward to reading more from you.
Midnitesun
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Gaia
8 posted 2001-12-29 08:16 PM


A wonderfully scented entrance to Passions. Welcome, and please delight our senses again soon!
Irish Rose
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9 posted 2001-12-29 09:51 PM


God, this is so beautiful, what an entrance you have made.  Keep writing!

I am/Kathleen/

EagleOne
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10 posted 2001-12-29 09:54 PM


I very much enjoyed this one, well done!
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